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A Valentine's Day to Treasure
by Janis Elizabeth

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Comment by llpglover on 05/15/13
Really drew the reader into the story with the descriptions of feelings. Very good work.

Comment by Chasmine on 09/19/11
Thank you so much for this atrcile, it saved me time!

Comment by ashley on 10/06/10
just love this type of story. yum yum!!

Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 06/07/04
Dear Janis Elizabeth,

I lied. I had to read one more of your stories before bedtime.

This, as the one with Tammy/Tim, is a, "feel good," story that sheds its' warmth to the reader. Again, it drew me into the story. Your descriptions of the clothing and the beauty spa experiences were well done. The love relationship you showed between the husband and wife makes me dreamy and misty-eyed. It drew me into the scene with envy, just as Mark Twain was drawn into Dana's "Two Years Before The Mast."

Also, if I have read correctly, you have written into the story what every transgendered person, be it a cross-dresser or transsexual)merely asks from the world. It's me. I'm the same human person inside; it shouldn't matter what clothes I'm wearing.

Well, my wife's back and legs need some rubbing. My nightgown was a Christmas gift from her to me in 2002. Since I do go to bed with my bra, panites, stockings, and heels still on I'm all ready. I'll be visiting StorySite tomorrow.

Huggles,

Susan Pauline

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/16/01
totally enjoyed and hung on every writen word if this wonderfuly sweet story. I loved the lingerie shop and the salon parts especially.

Comment by HB on 02/16/01
Janis:
 I've downloaded this file without reading it completely thru! I did this because all of your previous stories were so nice! I think the third paragraph from the bottom sums up what I feel we are! Please keep all your stories as nice as these are!!!



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