51fzTm Thank you, I ave just been looking for info about this subject for ages and yours is the best I ave found out till now. But, what in regards to the conclusion? Are you sure about the supply?

One of the best stories I have ever read.  Well thought out and it was exciting from beginning to end.  I hope you are still writing you are very talented.

This is one of the best stories I have read from this site, please continue it's to good not too!

what an intrestiong story well worth treading it needs to be continued please you cannot leave it there please

qzTimY Very amusing thoughts, well told, everything is in its place:DD

Very bad story.
DISGUSTING.

Story line is excellent, hopefully more is coming.
Gotta figure their all headed to the restaurant next ....

brilliant story great read more please it has the right amount of variety &dommination more please there is so much mote you can do with this story

hate to nit pick but i would have just went in the bushes

I have long loved this story and was surprised and saddened to see it stop.  I hope the authoress is well and that we will hear from her again. It would be a shame to let a story this exciting end here.

Michelle

I absolutely adore this story.  Is there anything we can do to encourage you to continue and save ourselves from dying of suspense (and frustration) in the meantime?  Please, please let us hear more soon.
       Missy

"She-Who-Must-Be-Obeyed." I loved that story by H. Rider Haggard from the time I first read it as a teenager. Cordellian, you have taken the premise to new heights. Love the story, love the writing style, but hated the 'ending'...just being left in mid air, almost mid sentence. Still I know there is moreto come, and, have to say, I can't wait.

Emma Reid is delicious, simply delicious. I thoroughly enjoyed Her slow introduction and development into the plot. But once She arrives,wow!

More PLEASE!

Great story, well written and enjoyable.

Personal quibble: what did Rob do that justified Emma in feminizing him?  Rob didn't do anything that bad (lusting after another woman while his girlfreind was away), especially compared to James/Louise.

On the other hand to sort of answer the criticisms below (and maybe my own as well) Rob must have subconciously wanted to be dominated and sissified by Emma or he would have accepted the (relativly) mild embaressment of the potty/diaper pictures.  Or it could be the sigil magic;)

In any event, please continue with more episodes and occaisionally let Rob out of the chasity belt so that he (and those of us who identify with him) can enjoy those sensual clothes, stockings, anal stimulation and orgasm.

SS

 

Fantastic!  Great story... please continue.  Congratulations.

Since it had been so long ago for me I had to re-read Chap 3 b4 starting Chap 4.  I felt you were starting to "ramble" when you talked about the fate of Louise's old girlfriend but then that 2x4 between the eyes of Emma & Jill coming to the apartment and his escape into Louise's bosses clutches. And leaving us with only a "pat on his short skirted ass"...that is so mean.

Great story and great storytelling so far.  I can't wait for the end to see what happens, even though I think I know his ultimate fate.  I hope to see more humiliation of the new "Jill", if for no other reason, he thinks he is so far above doing things women do or suffering as they sometimes do.

Thanks for a wonderful read.


xoxoxo
Stefani V.

Oooh! This is wonderful.  Please let us have more soon.

Super story: sorry we haven't had another part since April.  Hope you'll post it soon!

Love

patrick

One of the most fascinating stories i have reaf so far. Please give us some more parts. I love reading every single word of them.

I adore this story, but it is torture (of a different sort than that of the poor chastity-belted characters} waiting for the next shoe to drop (or be added to the protagonist's wordrobe).

What an awesome piece of literature!  It is the epitome of what this sub-genre (femdom, forced fem, humiliation) should be, at least for my tastes.  The pacing and dialog are incomparable, tantalizing the reader (and horrifying the victim) with hints of future embarrassment and forced self-abasement provided in just sufficient detail to allow the imagination to run wild, amplifying the horror, while the realities experienced by the victim reinforce and complement those hints in greater detail and with greater impact.   The agent of his undoing is utterly believable, and delightfully devilish and serene in her malevolence.  Kudos to Cordellian - may he continue adding to this story forever!

This is a delightful story, reminescent in some ways of Deborah Ford's writing.  Please do continue at great length.

   Thanks, Missy

Fantastic story - perfect pacing, careful thought - just wonderful. The growing trap - the horror of beginning to enjoy your transformation.  Power shifting...  Thank you!!!  I really enjoy how you mix common every-day references into this amazing journey.  It adds to the whole situation.  This is really a great story.  Please keep it coming. Congratulations.

a good fun story....but it only goes to show  u only have  one opportunity to get rid of blackmailer if u really want to poor rob has not much of brain first he could have cut his losses with photos and threatened violence it worked 4 me the threat of having a bottle of bud screwed into your face with a bit bravado worked 4 me but all the same once your in a belt the key holder has  advantage keep it up always worth waiting for next instalment bet louise gets his revenge xxsally

Delicious!

I just want to thank you for such a great piece of literature!  I love the slow blackmail stories the best.  thanks again

This is the best piece of work I have read on here for a long time.

Thanks for the great story!

Laxatives don't work on the bladder, they work on the bowels. Diuretics work on the kidneys and bladder.

It is a great story. Looking forward to future chapters.  Why does he doit? Goddess gave males both a penis and a brain, but only enoughblood to work one at a time.

I like especially the growing Gothic atmosphere (the literary Gothic, I mean,the tales of terror from Horace Walpole through Poe to Stephen King), the way it gets increasingly ominous, gradually darkening and shadowing the commonplace familiarity of everyday dorms and cars and coffeepots and cool girlfriends, until they themselves seem more threatening and irrelevant than reassuring.  I hope it won't get too heavy -- the narrator is speaking implicitly from the far end of the experience he's now revealing, and he sounds more amazed, awed maybe -- but also a little self-bemused -- than mind-blown or horribly transformed. But who knows what blackness lurks in the heart of She Who Must Be Obeyed?  Do keep it coming!

Hello, and many thanks for the feedback so far. I thought I’d just post a few replies to everyone who took time to post comments, and to let you know that I’ve just finished episode 3 which I’ll mail to Crystal tonight. The plot deepens, as they say!

Terri: point taken about diuretic versus laxative – lazy research on my part I confess. Not sure about the question marks though as I think I only used them at the end of questions (rhetorical or otherwise). Please let me know if I’m breaking a grammar rule by using them in dialogue.

You’re right of course that Rob’s best opportunity to get out of his worsening situation was right at the beginning with a ‘publish and be damned’ statement, but he didn’t have a lot of time to think and he had no idea how bad things will eventually get. If he could forsee what Emma has planned for him, and the lengths to which she is setting up this ‘game’ he would have taken the worst she could have dished out right at the start. His main worry of course was the possibility of losing Jill. It’s not so much the way he was dressed in the photos but the question what was he doing with Jill’s room mate dressed like that in the first place.

Ami: Yes there is something more insidious about Emma’s behaviour over and above the humiliation aspects of the story. There are going to be a few surprises in the story, and I’ll be interested to see if you see them coming later on. And yes, Emma is a deliciously nasty piece of work. And believe me, she’s only getting warmed up right now.

Jasmine: I haven’t read the stories you’ve mentioned, though I’ve now tracked them down via Google and will take a look. The name Ayesha actually comes from a very famous piece of 19th century literature (which I suspect is where Charles Forbin found the name) which is well out of copyright. I suppose I should state right away that there is no suggestion that Emma Reid and the eponymous character of said book are the same person – that’s not where my story is going. But Emma Reid did take her name, Ayesha, from the book.

Don: You’re spot on about Rob not understanding the situation or how bad it might get. It’s not normal after all for someone like Emma to go to such lengths to gradually humiliate and feminise someone. Rob can be forgiven for thinking initially it’s just a one off prank.

Thank you to everyone who e-mailed me privately as well. I’ll reply to each of you in turn once I’ve posted part 3 off. Thanks very much for reading!
 

blackmail facinates me must agree with amy baby pictures are a bit weak to use a hint to all xdressers and tvs here always have an excuse if your fotos are found as for falsifying computer records dangerous game go to jail do not collect 200 dollars or pounds I sometimes think my wife knows my little secret and says nothing but to be honest I couldnt tell her and the fear of her finding out could hold me for a while also mobiles are dangerous things as well you have pointed out story line ok fun but who will get upper hand thats up to you of course but nah the baby fotos wouldnt cut Id just drug her and do a lot worse shed get it doggy style woof woof with a german shepard bet the fotos would be safe   xxx sally

I think this is a great story. I liked part 1 and I love part 2.

I can't wait for more. I agree that Emma is a wonderful character.

And to cast a different vote, I hope the tables do NOT get turned...grin...I am happiest when the dommes win.

On the criticism regarding blackmail, I don't quite agree with some of the other readers. Obviously if the victim fully understood the consequences of what he was getting into, he likely would not give in.

But if blackmail is done properly, the victim doesn't fully understand the situation and its consequences until later when it ultimately is too late. I see it as Rob first trying to hold onto his girlfriend and then later still trying to get out of things somewhat gracefully. Not realizing that by trying to get out gracefully he is only ultimately making things much worse.

I think it's great.

Also of course I agree that your writing style is excellent--very good use of dialog.

BTW, a name can not be copyrighted. (People may be confusing copyright with trademark...).

Please keep writing more and more.

Thanks,

    Don

nice story's but be very aware that the name ayesha is in use by another im sure you have read the "Diaries of Ayesha" by Dr. Charles Forbin?   i hope that you have permission to use the name since i think its copyrighted   but as i said a very good story i wonder howmany wouldbe sissies read this and say it wont happen lol

keep up the great work  

I have to agree with Terri here.  I think the very direct blackmailing going on here wouldn't be enough to gain utter control over most people.  Besides, seeing someone dressed like a baby wouldn't be very unique on the average college campus.  It's called frat week.  And given the fact that he really hadn't been unfaithful to his girlfriend, I do believe he has very little to worry about other than one person's word against his and maybe a little explaining.

But, as was said, there must be a story.  So if the story continues in the vein it started in, I only hope that there is something more insidious for motivating Rob to become subservient to Emma in the next chapter.  I also hope that the promise in the heading of "much worse to come" is true.  I hate to see authors cave in to the popular opinion that pain and humiliation can't be synonomous with pleasure.

On a positive note, Emma is a great character.  Even in my most submissive fantasies I would have second thoughts about wanting to meet her.  She is heartless and cruel - I love it!

Also, the writing is very good.  Nice use of everyday props and unusual visuals to make the story interesting.  I don't have any real gripes with the editing like the first person to comment did.  Typos and ommisions happen.  Keep up the good writing!

-Ami

I know it's not going to happen- in these stories, it never does- but I am always reminded of a famous story involving the Duke of Wellington, winner of the Battle of Waterloo. It seems the Duke had a mistress, who needed a little extra money. She attempted to blackmail him, by threatening to publish a tell-all account of their affair unless he paid her off. His reply was classic: "Publish and be damned!"                                                                   I think he should cut his losses and tell her to post the pictures. It would be some embarrassment, but she wouldn't have any further hold on him, and he could avoid Louise's fate. Of course, then, as has been often pointed out, we wouldn't have a story.

He should either run or shoot her.  Seriously, I hope he does find a way to turn the tables; I hate it when the bad guys win.

This is interesting; I have to admit that the second chapter has gone in a different direction than I thought it would, but I look forward to reading more of this.  Keep it up!

Going great, please keep the story going !
Tony

I like it, please continue....

Good start- just a couple of comments. She gave him a diuretic, not a laxative (yes, there's a big difference). Also, the punctuation needs some work- all those out-of-place question marks get  pretty annoying. That aside, I'm interested in seeing where this goes.