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Back Door
by Vickie Tern

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Comment by juliej on 01/21/07

the story is a fast paced one this is intersting the reaction from his wife is bad enougn good story well written

Comment by Lowie on 04/15/06

I thought it was damn good. Controlling wife, feminizing, and love the imagery. It is a bookmark on my favorites.

It is deinitely a possible real life story

Comment by Dillon Doe on 02/17/05

To create an original thought is not easy.
To create an original thought and not dismiss it .. harder still
those who take an original thought past dismissal and create something from it get world acclaim.

so for those who have no better ideas than to point and ridicule .. try yourself to have an original thought and cultivate it.. and see you when you get done....

as for the rape issue.. if you read.. she had planned it.. so she was party to the rape and knew before hand what was going to happen to alvin...

Comment by jasmine on 02/10/05

lets think about this another way vicky tern.
a husband walks in on the same thing. he sees his wife naked with a man on top. he was asleep and woke up with him in her. its a rape and she insists it was and completely nonconsensual. the mans excuse is, she was so pretty he couldn’t control himself. lol, so damn common of an excuse for a rapist. he of course doesnt believe and tells her shes a whore and go with her lover. that alone, how does that sound, the loving husband telling his wife to go live with her own rapist. but it doenst end there. he give her an ultimatum. either consent to have sex with the man now whenever he wants her or he will divorce her and take everything.

the wife is doing this because he is a victim of rape. and now demanding he consent to sex when ever he wants. and telling him he isnt her husband. what a loving woman. he needs to leave her and report the assault and let the toad rapist know he is a rapist and not safe to be around.

Comment by jasmine on 02/10/05

one would expect more symphy from his wife after being raped.
guess not for this heartless toad. shes doing this because he was raped. he should devorce her if she doesnt confort him for a sexuall assault.

Comment by Jill M I on 01/31/05

Why would someone post such a comment?

Maybe Vicki hit a nerve?

This is a fairly good story with enough twists and "Terns" to make it interesting.

It isn't one of Vicki's best, but it is still is far above average for the genre.

Jill

Comment by Stephanie (maybe) on 01/27/05

You REALLY DO NOT want my comments on this story. The same trite tired old SCHLOCK.

Of course the C/R is in 1997.

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