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Back To School - Woman's Work
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/24/09
No! I can't believe!
It's a bad tale. Unfair.
Silvia.

Comment by Hydie on 10/09/08
Another great story.  As I read your stories I always get a smile on my face because they always turn out the right way.

Comment by cindy on 07/13/07
Hi, loved your story, but I do feel you could have worked in pretty aprons there somewhere, just a thought, cindy

Comment by rone on 07/31/06
 Well he finley caught on and did very well ...
sometimes Mom does know best ....

well done thanks Rone


Comment by juliej on 03/06/06
your story sence is brilliant the scope and the changes in your story are great this one seemed a little putout but i imagine his mother hap this plannned for some time great story more please,i would like to see further in this story as to how john was at college and any hard times he had

Comment by Early June on 06/20/05
The scope of your imagination never ceases to amaze me.  This essay is conceivably possible. under some conditions, maybe even a probable situation.  And you work it in so smoothly.  Easy and enjoyable fun reading.  I have had my Jennifer White fix for today.  I still have a large unread cache, so I won't run out anytime soon.  Thank you for sharing this story with us.



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