Oh to have been granted a dream such as this back in high school.
Love the twist.

Yes, I like this story. I don't think I would have had the fortitude to thank gina though. The bible says do good to those who despise and persecute you and you will be heaping hot coals over them. I realize that is what he was doing but I couldn't I have a judgmental streak in me that precludes me from letting the guilty off (at times).

Just loved your story. It was so nice to see that there was no embarsement shown. It was a good story.

 Nice well written and fun ....  there is more that could be done with this and a second chapter would be great ...

thank you for sharing your talent with us ...
xoxoxoxoxox   Rone Welles

a trick that failed and mark relised his true self well done

I have enjoyed Backward dance
as it is written without profanity and grossness. teh Story is well writena nd takes the reader through expectingone thing and finding at teh end that the plan of the so called most popular girl backfired and she is now being cast off as not important enought to be botheresd with. that is one upsmanship and it makes the story come alive at the end.

I almost always like your stories.  This is one of the better ones.  I liked the twist.  If you add to it, I hope Dawn "accidently" bests Gina to the extent of the mischief she has caused Mark.  Assual you have added to my enjoyment.  Thank you for sharing this well written tale with us.

I'm writing a first serial myself - I've loved some of your previous stories.  This one is shaping up nicely.  Please, please indulge me and put more in about the hair and make-up next time!  luv 'n huggzz

Ginger

I think Dawn's going to be in control of Gina and Susan pretty quick!  She might be sub to Greg*, but she's confident and pretty and feels she doesn't need the others, so she'll take "girl control"  I hope she has "surprises" waiting for Susan and especially Gina so those two amoral bitches get what they deserve.

* - Actually, when Dawn has a bit more experience of the power girls have over men, I bet Greg will find himself telling her to do exactly what SHE wants to do and thinking it was his own idea :-)