It did have it's funny side when the boy said ( I can become a real woman) No your a boy/man who's had his nut's removed and grown a pair of tit's. Not a real woman at all.

Nice story. I am from india  I like to do frnd ship. Janet or any one interested

This turned to be a dream come true for that kid.  It would be nice if it could really happen so easy for those who want it!

Another grear story Janet. I alwaays look forward to reading your stories. Well done.

A lovely fantasy.

i think a better title is either the very wrong pills or the accident. as always you are the best writer on this site almost as good as i am remember for every great writer that gets published there is a greater one that doesn't. but this was a good story.

PERSONALLY, I AGREE WITH DIANE AND KIM. JILL, THIS IS FICTION, NOT REALITY. JANET WRITES SWEET, SENTIMENTAL STORIES THAT CONTINUE TO SHOW HER MATURING AS AN AUTHOR. YES, I WOULD LOVE TO MEET JANET. BUT THAT IS MY FANTASY. I STARTED READING HER STORIES AND HER STORIES OPENED MY HEART TO THE WORLD OF THE TRANS GENDERED. UNFORTUNATELY WE HAD A FALLING OUT, BUT I STILL ENJOY HR STORIES AND DARE ANYONE TO TAKE POTSHOTS AT HER. AS FOR THE STORY, I ASSUME THE GIRL HAS SEX WITH HER DATE. JANET, AGAIN, I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE HER STORY. BUT THAT IS MY OPINION. MAY YOUR STAR ALWAYS SHINE

another brilliant story in respect of taking the wrong vitamins great mind for story writing well done

cute story. i love it

I loved your story.  Some critics have complained that this or that wouldn't have happened.  But this is a fantasy. It's a fantasy that most people in the transgender comunity understand.  It's our dream.
I loved it.

I love Janet's stories all of them without exception to this date. OH as has been mentioned Janet does make a few minor mistakes every so often but like it was said these are fantasy stories and we all enjoy to just read something like her works to allow us to just dream a little.

I'll say this about Janet she is a very prolific writter and I'm glad to know her from emails. One day I hope to actually meet her. Maybe this year if she goes to Southern Comfort.

Anyways' her story was very entertaining and a joy for those of her fans to read I'm sure.

For those who have read Janet's early work they are quite different in style and in content. I'm sure that her fans who have not yet tried some of her earlier works will find those stories also a treat as I have recently.

Diane

and yes I enjoyed this story.  Janet is a good writer but the comments page are here to help the writers.  We help to give directions so that the next story is even better.

Gosh Jill, are you attacking me?  I have the right to leave my comments on the story and you can leave your comments on the story.  But my comments are perfectly OK and shouldn't come under attack from other readers.

I think that stories are better when work is undertaken to make the story accurate and believable.  This story wasn't a sci-fi.  No magic pills here.  This was a real life type of story.  I see a lot of stories where someone takes estrogen and their beard starts to thin out or disappear.  No, not in real life and not in a real life type of story will taking estrogen cause a man's beard to disappear.  A real life type of story needs the details to make it believable.

Sure the mom would have known the pills were disappearing.  She also would have taken her son to several specialists... seeking a myriad of opinions before accepting that 'nothing can be done'.  

In real life the doctor wouldn't have changed from a she to a he when they left 'his' office.  

We all know the relatives would have stepped in to "HELP" and some do-gooder would have called the applicable arm of government to stop this crazed woman from abusing her child.  Some child protection agency would have turned this probelm over to a committee, which would have Nathan become some androgynous spectre that fits in nowhere.

There is no doubt that had this actually happened, the bully next door would have recognized Nathan and would have beat him to a pulp long before any explanation could have given.  Perhaps the first time Nathan would have noticed his new chest would have been during a beating when the bully gave him a tit-twister.

Given most store clerks are underaid and horribly overworked they would have refused to help the woman feminize her son simply due to their own frustration.  

If this wasn't fiction the beautician would have called the cops before allowing the evil lady to treat her son in such a horrible way.

If this was accurately written, Nathan would have frozen in fear and refused to leave his room after being fully clothed in girl's things.  Possibly he would have become totally unresponsive / catatonic.

But that wouldn't have been have as much fun as this FANTASY.

I love your work, Janet.  It is gentle, loving and pleasingly predictable.  The mother did her best to work with the situation in such a way as would best serve her new daughter.  The neighbors (mother and daugher) were as accepting and considerate as you could ask.  The physicians were kind and helpful.

Too bad we all can't be so tolerant.

I read everything you write Janet... and love most of it.

Much love to you in return.

Jill

Nice story, but....

Wouldn't his Mom had noticed that her estrogen pills were disappearing faster than normal?  Before a whole year?

another wonder story. Love how the character goes from not wanting to be a girl to shrugging his/ her shoulders when ask why he she is dress like a girl.