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Bahamas
by Elizibeth

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Comment by Fiona on 07/20/19
I really enjoyed the slow development of this story.
It must have taken a lot of work.
Nicely crafted with attractive characters.

Comment by Tanya on 09/15/13
This is a really lovely story.  Nicole is an adorable character who is clearly naturally pretty as some young boys are.  And he allows the transformation from boy to girl without any fuss.  Only recently I saw at the place where I worked a little boy of twelve or thirteen with a mass of long blond curls around a round naturally pretty face and wearing shorts and showing lovely legs and looking shy and smiling softly at everybody.  And I remember thinking, wow, what a girl he would make.  I would have liked to see the story of Nicole develope into a sequel with Nicole having a boyfriend rather than becoming a lesbian.  But otherwise, I could hardly complain and would say well done to the writer of this.

Comment by Ron on 10/01/12
Dear Elizabeth,

Just read your story Bahamas and thoroughly enjoyed it.  It is the best story I have read yet on this web.  Please give us some more.

Ron


Comment by joey on 10/18/09
Nice story.

Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/20/09
 A lovely,soft story,told with a lot of empathy and understanding.
 You have the ability to show the feelings of your subjects and to draw them out so don't stop here----let's have some more !
Thank you and God bless.Alison

Comment by Stefan(ie) on 05/08/08
Really enjoyed this story. So many memories came flooding back.
Many thanks.

Comment by Paula on 02/17/08
This story takes me back to my early teens when I used to secretly wear pretty little bikini bottoms under my regular boys swimsuit when my mother would take my sister and me to the beach. I'd go for long walks by myself until there was no one else around. I remember how my heart used to pump with excitement when I'd look all around (to make sure the coast was clear) and then slip off my trunks and continue walking in a hot pink bikini bottom. Those were the first times I ever went out in the open and took a chance of getting caught wearing something feminine.  It was so much fun to feel like a sexy girl!

Comment by Elizibeth on 02/13/08
Thank you all for the kind words :)
I am new at this, and found that my area of expertise (and intrest) is more in the transformation, the unsure stage and the like, but I will certainly work on the 'getting used to femininity' part for all of you. Thank you again!

Comment by billy on 02/06/08
lovely story. would like to read more about nicoles first year as the new girl.

Comment by Leslie on 02/06/08
I'll admit, I was a little disappointed towards the end that it didn't expand on Nicole's life as a woman, but I must say the note from Allison at the end made it totally worthwhile!  It really was a joy to read and I hope you write more very very soon!  

Comment by linda on 02/05/08
loved the story, but was disappointed at the end.  I feel you could get a lot more mileage out of this and hope you continue with Nicoles transition to womanhood

Comment by Julie on 02/04/08
What a wonderful store, wonderful reading, meny thanks

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 02/04/08
Lovely story! I envy Nicole and have often dreamed of having an Allison in my life!  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by Claudia on 02/04/08
Great storie and wonderful godmother for Nicole, i love the way Nicole found her real Femenine soul.



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