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Ballerina
by Jennifer White

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Comment by awesome site on 11/20/13
bdWezA Thanks again for the article.Thanks Again. Really Great.

Comment by Ray on 10/19/07
I love this story and I wish you had more to say about ballet. Would love to read about a little boy taking ballet and crossdressed as a little girl.

Comment by umtigh on 03/07/04
I love Strip Clubs and I loved this story. I wish it would have lasted longer.

Comment by Scalper16 on 03/07/04
I admit, usually I love Jennifer White's magical transformation stories.  But, this was SO corny.  Actually, it was less of a story, than a chance for the author to (oddly enough) get on a soapbox about how great strip clubs are.  Plus, the opponents of strip clubs were given incredibly unrealistic lines to imply that not only didn't they like strip clubs, but they were incredibly stupid.

Personally, I don't care much about strip clubs one way or the other.  But, a didactic TG tale about how great they are is among the last things I'd ever want to read.



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