I loved the story all finesse and nothing else! Hoping for lots more as it reminds me of my school days.I think my mother always wanted a daughter and all she was a fairly skinny boy. She made the excuse that she couldn’t get underpants small enough so always “had to” buy girls knickers/panties for me. This continued quite late into junior school with all the subsequent embarrassment and excitement until she finally conceded boys underwear would be more appropriate. The rest of my school days went as normal but thankfully in my late teens early twenties a fetish for wearing knickers or panties has reappeared and continues to this day.
Thanks for a great and fitting story.

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Beautiful.

You know how to write a bad Story!
very bad story!

I am dissapointed the story finished suddenly,i was hoping they were
going to sleep together.I love girls helping boys to be little girls.

HELLO.I JUST LOVED THIS STORIE,ONLY IT WAS ME REPLACING JIMMY.     I I THINK THAT ITS A CRIME TO END IT ,JUST AS IT WAS STARTING TO GET INTRESTING,IT HAS SO MUCH MORE YET TO BE RELEASED/DUG OUT.IT WOULD BE A TOTAL INJUSTICE NOT TO TAKE IT FUTHER,WITHOUT HAVING TO USE DEPRAVITY.PLEASE DO CARRY ON WITH THE STORIE OR I WONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO ME.(REMEMBER I SWAPED PLACES WITH JIMMY ) IT WAS BEAUTIFUL. THANK YOU. BERNICE. EMAIL ADD IS TRUE

Beffy:

A beautiful, wonderful, sweet story of puppylove and many other facets/types of love.  I hope in the near future you will add more installments.  If for some reason you cannot, then so be it.  We all have to march to our own drummer but I hope your's still has some 'ballet' cadence left in him/her.  You have given your fans some of the very best reading of Crystals wonderful site, but I sympathize if there are reductions in the flow of your creative juices or if the burdens of the 'real' world just keep you from it.  After all I'm still nowhere near the completion of 'THE Great American Novel', which I started over seven years ago.

I find the chemistry building up between Jimmy and Jenny (and the other Dale girls) very believable, sweet, and innocent.  Even the difficulties Mrs. Dale has I find realistic and understandable, being a single mother not having time for a social life of her own. Working hard to provide and protect her children she also makes a point of spending quality time with her daughters.  I can see how ignoring her own needs could find her off guard when a man is under her roof.  I hope she finds relief when Jimmy's mom gets back home in a few days and they share their common love and admiration for what a sweet boy Jimmy is.  I can also see more closeness between Florence and the girls, the two families almost becoming one, and most of all I can see Jimmy/Jenny's puppylove growing to first true love, growing to only true love, to sharing Soc. Security checks...

I'm sorry the romantic girl in me got carried away.  Beffy see what happens to your readers when you stay away from the keyboard too long!

God bless you Beffy.  We love you dearly.

Susana  

 I really enjoyed this story, however you need to add additional chapters.  Since there was no way to email you, I decided that maybe the comments perhaps would actually be read by you.  I like the way you progressed through the story, unlike some of the others I've read here.  I thought the mother of jenny was going to put him him in a bridesmaid dress in the earlier chapter when she put her slip on him. I was following this closely, but he mostly wore tights, nylons and panties.  I know at the end he wore a nightdress but it is not the the same as when a boy puts on his first dress with a slip, panties, halffold lacetop socks and girls shoes (not heels).  It is also exhilarating being taken OUTSIDE the first time dressed as a girl.  I know from experience.  My mother and a neighbor girl did this to/for me and the excitement at times becomes almost overwhelming. A million questions pass throught your head (what if someone I know sees me,if I get caught, do I really look like a girl, plu others.)
 So you see you need to finish this. What happen later, did he dress-up further?, did his mom find out?, did he find he liked being a girl/boy? Did he and jenny find the happiness they both sought?  These are a few of the questions that need to be answered.
 So PLEASE finish this with a few more chapters. Thank you for anything you could do to resolve this.

Excellent series, the right mix of fun and excitement.
Can't wait for the next installment.

Yummy yummy YUMMY! More please!

this ballet game develops with a determindely slow pace.I anticipate jimmy's first skirt/dress, maybe chapter 18 (?) Everyone wants more.

Great story I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

JB

Thanks Beffy, please don't wait another year for another story. These are the best stories on this site. I'd like to see Jimmy join the ballet classes anyway and be made to wear panties and a bra that peek out from his leotard.

I think somehow Mrs Dale should demand that from him.

Thank you again.

Beffy, Loved the new entry! Perfect as always. I love that you brought back the ballet outfits. Please let Jenny get him into the full gear: tights, leotard, slippers, etc. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks a lot, dude :)

There have not been many stories that keep you excited to the very end, the 11 have certainly done that for me. What a dream situation. And the girls Mother joining in as well, that adds even more spice to the story. I wish there were more story writers like that which I could find.

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Absolutely 'BRILLIANT' story, VERY well written! I just loved the way Jenny 1 manipulated the rather innocently demure Jenny 2 into her web, (like the spider to the fly.) Please, please give me more!                                            As a suggestion, I would like Jenny 1 to get Jenny 2 into her leotard and 'PINK' ballet tights, and get his mum to enroll him into the ballet class, which I think he (secretly) wants to do anyway!  Vicki. xx

I have yet to find stories this exciting.  Unbelievable.   Just f...... unbelievable.   Perfect in every way...

Buffy Buffy Buffy.

You are playing with fire here.
I can see flames of innocent lust burning in every letter.
And the girls mother seems very ahh, intimate?

But I'm sure it's all done in innocent fun, right?
R i g h t...

Gotta think about my blood pressure here.
Yes, i definitly need to know what happens here.
So I can take warning of, or on, course :)

A most splendid tale.
And I'm sure there is a moral somewhere.
Right? Or is it to the left?
Anyway...

cheers
Yoron.

Please!  What happened to this wonderful serial story?  It is so well written that is I keep starting at the beginning and going to the last chapter hoping for another.

Please, just one more!

Awesome! Redemptive! Pleeeeeeez don't stop.

so good...i spent a weekend reading and dreaming this series....incredible...

Perfect! Once again you've captured my imagination and taken the story to new heights. Incredibly hot and somehow gentle at the same time. I would only ask that you add some ballet gear into the mix - otherwise, it's perfect!

They said a round trip mission too the planet MARS would take 27 months... I would take some CHARLES DICKENS, JULES VERNE & MARK TWAINE and to change the pace some I now would add some stories by BEFFY FLOWERS ... I will ceartinly look foreward too reading more of this "THE BALLET GAME" and anything else put out by this wonderful author ...

Excellent story, descriptive of clothes and kind, caring characters.  I am looking forward to reading another story soon.  Thank you much for what you have written,
Best regards,
Patty

Very good story. Please don't wait so long between chapters. Good writers are becoming hard to find these days. Thank you very much.

I said it once, and I'll say it again. OMG.....it's perfect!  I can't even make it through two episodes. So amazing.............

Great playful and fun theme to the story and very well written.

It'd be great to see Jenny and Jimmy get a bit more intimate before his mom returns and he has to return home.

Keep up the good work and I'll keep my eye out for the next version.

Great to have you back, Beffy! Loved the new entry - the relationship is building naturally, nice details, wonderful characters. I would only ask that you not forget the 'ballet' in the "Ballet Game".

Please bring back the emphasis on clothing items that are at least peripherally associated with ballet: tights, leotards, slippers, etc. Even the tangents involving slips and pantyhose work but, somehow, an entire entry devoted to bras feels off. I'm not trying to be picky. I know beggars can't be choosers.

Anyway, welcome back again! This is such a well-written, sweet and sexy story. I can't wait to see where it goes next!

I loved the story and would like to continue reading further. I am glad that you are building slowly on the relationship between Jimmy and Jenny.

a first reading of this story its brilliant i have read it all the way through i would like to se more of this please its a great story something like his mother having an accident that was fatal the adoption proccess by mrs dale &then a final transformation into a girl a bit of bondage would be enjoyable as well brilliant story many thanks

I'm so glad you came back to add to this wonderful story Beffy!

Looking forward to reading more.

Huggles
Angel

Thanks for getting back to poor Jimmy's story.  Glad to see that you have still have your story telling touch.  Looking forward to further installments.  

When are the ballet lessons?  Does there relationship go further than kissing?  So many questions raised by so much wonderful prose; will there be more soon? Please!

This set of stories is well written and a very good read, especially compared to a lot of the stuff I read here.  Please post a sequel very soon.

Wonderful story and, I have to agree with "balletboy's" comments.... you should have dressed up in leotards, tights, etc... take up some ballet/ tap dancing classes... been in a "review", etc... etc... I wish that I were the main character (Jimmy/Jenny 2)in this story!!!

Oh my God................you got it exactly right!!!

more please

Fours years in the making! Beffy comes back and finishes this story! No, but seriously, it's been two full years since the last entry. Beffy come back. Surely you've got a backlog of wonderful material to share with us. Please?

Just had to write and say how much I loved this little story but, you just cant leave us dangling like this , you have to take this further PLEASE, PLEASE, I'm sure there is more in you about this lucky lads tempory house hold and all those beautiful characters in it.You must have enough ideas saved up by now ..!!!

          Hugs   &   Kisses

                Kathryn.
                        ( uk )

Nice story but he needs to be dressed in his new ballet clothes and take class. Maybe it would be nice to find out the school doesn't have any boys tights or leotards so he will have to make do with a girls outfit of pink tights and leotards. Then we could see his reaction in the class in front of all the leotard clad girls. It would also be nice if maybe he ened up in the ballet chicken costume he refred to earlier in a class recital.

Please continue your great story! (:

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excelant start and story line....Now you need to take him to dance lessons and get him started with special dance outfits..Here he excells and becomes a good dance team member....His mom has a problem
and cannot get home for about a mounth ...plenty of time for jenny 1 to  get   jenny 2  ready for the upcomming dance when the star dancer
sprains her ancle during pratice...jenny 2 takes over and saves the show...he discovers his mom in the audince when she see him is thrilled and helps him and jenny1  become dancing partners and a star
team is born traveling all over with the school to show dance
to other schools  ....will he ever get back to being a boy ???
love the way this was done good clean fun and no cussing or smutt..
way to girl ...thank  you  thank you .. love you      RONE






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I love the story and hope to get more. :-)

I just loved the story, it kept getting better with each new installment.  I just wish that I could have bee j 2.  At that age i would hve been the perfect jenny 2 and I would hVE BEEN SO HAPPY.

Peter, I think it's safe to say that Jimmy and Jenny have left us. It's been 9 months since the last update. I think it's time we (myself included) all move on to other stories. Beffy started a great series, lost interest and now it will have to live on in our own imaginations.

The dream has died. Jimmy and Jenny are dead. The mother in the story, dead. The sister, dead. The woman at the ballet school, dead. The ballet school itself has burned to the ground. All of the tights and pantyhose in the story have spontaneously combusted. Everything's burnt to cinders. No phoenix will rise from the ashes because even if it did, it too would die. Bird flu.

This message board's a ghost town. Tumbleweeds drift aimlessly amongst two year old messages of praise. Your pointless encouragement and hopeful conjecture echoes hollowly across the cold, dead cyberscape. With each passing month, Beffy drifts further away from her creation. Characters left frozen in mid-action. Promises unkept. Entropy.

Does a tree make a sound if it falls and no one is there to hear it? Do Peter's messages reach an author who has abandoned her story? Mysteries unsolved, unanswerable.

Find a new story. Find an author who cares.

will jimmy ask jenny if they can play dress up more often then just bedtime. will jenny have her mom or sister try on some more clothes to see if they fit like the dress for the wedding or will jenny's mom have him try some clothes in the store dressing room for jenny for a gift.

will jenny get jimmy to wear her clothes more than just bedtime because it makes her happy to see him like that.

It is a good story to read and much enjoying. Me love words in story. It please me eye to see on the screen words that make picture in head. Hulk smash. Hulk love to smash.

it is a good story to read and I was wondering what outfit jenny will have jimmy to wear for the night. will jenny ask her sister laura for what outfit she should put on jimmy.

It's nearly been half a year since the last update on this story. I hope this hasn't been abandoned.

Great story. Like love in  part 4 when Mrs Dale checks to see that Jimmy has his panties on. This theme thru out the story is so wow fun . She checks and says Good you have your panties on and then lets that pantywaist snap back on him. Surley at sometime he will run out of his boxer shorts and and mRs Dale and the girls will take him to the Mall to get him his own panties to wear to school. Thanks fun story/hope for more.

it is a good story to read and interesting what will happen in the next chapter.

will jenny stuff the bra the next time she put it on him.

when does jenny get him to wear the ballet suit and does he take ballet class in the ballet outfit like jenny does.

will she say to him that they would say the tights look better with his legs shaved. does she want him to her bras for now on to bed because she saw how it looks and feels on him. is his hair long enough for anything to be done to it. will she put nail polish on his nails.

I just came across your sequence.. read it all from the start and loved it (so far).  Could the boy have his hair done sometime soon?  Love to hear how you weave that into the story.
Ginger

Great story. I love that you've kept it light and gentle. I hope you will keep this tone throughout as it is working very well and has made the story that much more stimulating and memorable. Please don't allow things to drift into simple darkness or banality. I think even having the main character get spanked heads too far into territory that's been covered over and over again in this kind of fiction.

I can't wait for the description of Jenny dressing Jimmy in her ballet costume. The exquisitely tender torture of her drawing the tights up his legs, having him step into the leotard and finally sliding into her delicate little ballet slippers. All the while, poor Jimmy quivering inside, trying to keep himself from bursting. Wow, that's powerful stuff.

I truly love this story. Honestly, I've been looking for this type of erotic fiction ever since I became aware of the internet. You've managed to combine great writing, interesting characters and an odd sweetness in a way that hits all the right tingly notes. Please continue your amazing work.  

Great Story still i liked the last part it was great and i agree with the rest i think its time for him to go too ballet class but i do think it should b in jenny's leotard and tights and jenny should wear a new set and they should alternate each time

It's a great story, and a relief to finally find a heterosexual story where a boy just loves and is fascinated by beautiful clothes and fabrics and the mysteries they contain.  I also appreciate that he's encouraged at every turn -- too many stories are dark and ugly.  This is by far the best story I've read on the site!  Please keep writing.

Awesome!!! I agree w/ the others about Ballet time! For some strange reason I can imagine J-2 inadvertently breaking a family rule, like swearing, and having to be spanked silly by the girls while in a tutu.  (the recital tutu of course).  Anyway, whatever happens- I can't wait- you're such a talented writer, Beffy!

I love this story, and cannot wait until the next installment. I would like to see Jenny 2 take ballet class, but would like him/her to be able to wear the same leotard and tights as Jenny 1, just like every other girl in the class. Maybe Mrs Dale can check his/her leotard and tights.

Such cute stories! And I love that Jimmy/Jenny Two is with Jenny - I really prefer stories where the boy stays with girls, not boys. Is there a complete makeover in Jenny Two's future?

I love this story, very well written and entertaining, and exciting.  Please keep telling us Jenny-two's story!!!

Now, this is a story! Well written, the storyline stays intact without rushing things. No glaring mistakes, niether with typos or in grammer that I could see.

Unlike Jezzi, I can see where Mrs. Dale was drawn as she was to this boy. The way he willingly and "tingingly" went along willingly wanting more of these sensations is such a new experience for her. She has no little boys, and to have the extrordinary one living with them is just to tempting.

I know what you are saying Jezzi and I do agree with your point, but in reality these things happen and not all of them are abusive or as a peodophile would try. No, Mrs. Dale is simply a women alone with two girls and suddenly finds herself with a dream boy child! Let her have her fantasies will you? She hasn't done anything really abusive and just having her hand rest on his boyness (wearing panties and pantyhose even) is no great crime. She did think he was sleeping after all. I doubt she would have done that if she knew he was awake. She quickly took her hand away when she felt him respond to her touch, and it was a fascinating event to see a young boy climax in his sleep. Now what did she do when she went back to her room? Just one guess for you Jezzi! Giggle, giggle.

Keep up the great writing Beffy!
Huggles
Angel

I just discovered this story and it isn't really my genre, but I have to say that the writing is superb.  You are a talented writer.  Again, this isn't my genre but I may keep reading just for the writing.  Good job.

-Ami

A little late, but this is really a GREAT story! A nice gentle tale of a boy exploring a side most boys refuse to acknowledge they have.
 A side that should make them better lovers and husbands (my opinion).
 Please continue in the same loving vein!
 

this story so rocks !!!
i so hope our hero gets put into ballet classes soon!
do you think he may wear more feminine, tight underclothing in public? I think the girls could probably convince him its appropriate!

I absolutely love this story!!
Thank You for such an enjoyable tale thus far, I almost wish I was Jimmy :).
 Please keep it going.
                      Thanks Again

Beffy,

Thanks for the last post.  Hopefully Jimmy will actually be in ballet lessons soon??

I really have liked this because it was a sweet story of a young boy easing into the joys of femininity, but I was really uncomfortably disturbed by Mrs. Dale's actions in this episode; she is bordering dangerously on pedophilia and abuse, which would, in my opinion, destroy all the sweetnes of the story.

Heya Beffy,

How I mssed 'Ballet Game' earlier I can't imagine.   You have crafted a vey exciting story.   I am so looking forward to future episodes.  I see that you have  very positive comments from all of the usual suspects.  I hope that this gives you motivation to hurry future posts.    HUGS

come on girl make the 9th one its really really great this is and itll b a shame to end it there and its just such a great story plz plz plz plz continue it on

this is a good story to read and what happens next in the 9th part which piece of clothing does he pick to wear.

Ohmigosh Beffy -- it's like, November already!!! I hope you post more of your super delicious story soon!!! (:

Your story is great but you should add in your next part something about doing their hair together.

A really great story: I can hardly wait for the next installment !!
Good on you Beffy.

Just want to second the previous few posts! Beffy, you are such a teaser! I hope you are able to continue your deliciously fun work soon -- it seems you're at a turning point in the story!!! (:

Hi Beffy,

Don't you dare change a thing! Giggle, giggle. 10K is the minimum accepted length for a story chapter and you are making them a little larger. That is the way this story is so catchy and keeps me wanting more and more.

I agree with my sister Jezzi, this is a great teasing story and YOU GO GIRL!

Huggles
Angel

after part 8:

Jenny One has poor (?) Jimmy hooked, now all she has to do is reel him (?) in.  Jimmy doesn't seem too reluctant to become Jenny Two, though ...

<< "So, which do you want to wear tonight?" her voice nearly a whisper now. "This nice leotard?" Then she drew his fingers lightly to her bra strap, "or my favorite school bra?"  >>

... Can he answer, "Both" ?   :-)

I'm enjoying this; the rather slow pace adds to the pseudorealism.  I'm looking forward to part 9 and beyond.

Each chapter is a positive little gem, but at the same time, each portion of this marvelous confection is oh so frustrating in its brevity!  I'm enjoing this story immensely, but I feel like a shark in a tank being hand-fed minnows one at a time!  Still, they are the TASTIEST minnows and I wouldn't change a thing.  Keep 'em coming!

Omigosh! Beffy! Thank you for continuing your great story! Oh, the anticipation for what's next! Please write more soon! And I thought Beffy and her readers might get a, uh, kick out of a few fun links from the photography website webshots.com.  You guessed it -- white swans vs. black swans from a ballet dance recital! (You look at these photos and think -- aren't many women crossdressers too!)

http://community.webshots.com/s/image11/0/25/30/129702530PLjxNN_fs.jpg
http://community.webshots.com/photo/129697971/129702132CiUhJy
http://community.webshots.com/photo/129697971/129702210nUnrvz
http://community.webshots.com/photo/139604330/143423756kDFUHS

At Last!  At Last!  Anticipation *is* making me wait!  Thanks Beffy, for the latest installment to your terrific story.

I expect Jimmy will be taking ballet lessons very shortly!  And those tingling feelings will be coming fast and furious!  A lovely story that lets me recall my own 'tinglings' from that age of discovery, innocence, and wonder.  Thank you.

Thanks so very much for the latest installment, Beffy.  You are teasing me with what might develop both with shoes and dance lessons.  And the way you describe the mothers reaction to what the girls are doing is priceless.  In this regard, your words are brief but your message is excellently presented.  Sometimes saying less communicates more.

Please post a new part of this amazing story!!!

I loved part 6 of the story, especially the discovery of his past ballet sessions.  This opens the door of anticipation once again.  Beffy, you have real talent in this regard.  Along with many others, I await your next installment.

Absolutely billiant

P L E A S E continue your absoloutly wonderfull story!!!!

Beffy -- are you still working on your wonderful story?
I hope you add some more chapters! Will the mother have to
punish him and spank him? Will the sisters? -- or pop his cherry?
Ohh, ohh -- we all still remember the line -- 'good, you've your panties on!' (:

As other people have said Beffy. Keep up the good work, and don't keep us in suspence. Hehe. Am looking forward to the next part. :)

Beffy, you have to finish this story.  It is well written, the subject matter is realistic and made of dreams that only a sissy can imagine!  Terrific story girlfriend!

This story continues to get better with every chapter.  Keep going, I love it.

What an adorable story.  How pretty Jenny One, Jenny Two and Laura must be!  I hope that Mommy will soon join in the fun.

Hugs and kisses for Beffy.

Wow... great suspense in this story, this has to be one of the best stories on the StorySite! I cannot wait to see what happens to Jimmy in the ballet class. There are endless possibilities with this story. Keep it up Beffy

This is a great story line.  I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment!  Please Please keep up the great work!

Just love how sweet the story is! Please write more and soon!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

Beffy,

Do you realize this is the shortest, sweetest, and bestest story in all of Storysite and Fictionmania-land right now!  You put such care in the development and descriptions! And so yes, I understand why you add to it every so often, but jeez!  Could you pretty please with lots of sugar on top -- keep writing! Thanks! (:

Your story is developing so very nicely.  I treasure each new chapter, wishing with every line that I could be jenny Two/

Please write more chapters to this amazing story. The suspense is almost to the point of being agonizing. Please type faster. Pklease hurry.

I agree with Jezzi. Giggle, giggle.

Jenny One sure knows what she is doing and I bet Mom knows all as well. Please don't make us wait this long again for the next part????

PLEASE????

Huggles
Angel

Sounds like Jenny One knows exactly what she's doing, playing poor Jimmy like a violin, enjoying her feminine power over boys.  A Vickie Tern woman in the making - "JayCee;  The Prequel" ??  Poor Jenny Two doesn't stand a chance.  Hope there is not 5 months between parts 4 and 5.  

wonderfull wonderfull woderfull what more can one say  write more please  love wendy

Suspence is killing me! Glad Jimmy is (Finally) in tights. Wondering what his reaction will be wearing a leotard and hopefully a tutu! Hoping that in their closet is a dance recital costume big enough for him! How many were changed like me by the experience of wearing a leotard and tights?

Very exciting!  Your skill as a writer has me on the edge of my seat! Please, please continue.

This third part is every bit as enjoyable as i was hoping it would be.  Don't rush the development of the plot.  Let us treasure each and every feminizing moment and let us know more about how the girl's mom feels about what her daughters are doing...... obviously, she approves.

Lovely story. I just wish that I was Jimmy. I hope that this leads to the sweet exploration of their sexuality. Love & Kisses

Thank you for the delightful stories.  They are a must read!  Please keep up the sequence.

great story so far i want to see what happens to jimmy the only sad bit is that it gets good then its bedtime

Oh my oh my! What a tantalizing story! You're such a teaser! Just when it gets good, it's bedtime! (:

Very nice story - realistic buildup and I like the underlying attraction tension between the two main characters.
Looking forward to seeing where it goes - but keep doing hwat you are doing - don't rush it

Well written story with lots of nice touches and attention to the boy's feelings.  My only concern is the boys age and what the R rating might portend.  I would feel more comfortable if Jimmy were13 or 14.  Nonetheless, great story so far keep up the good work.

SS

Thank you all for such wonderful support!  I love to hear what readers like about this story, and although writing is a huge effort for me, your delightful comments make it all worthwhile!

This is a thoroughly enjoyable story.  I cannot wait to see what happens to him while the "girls" are in ballet class.  ane what other things that Jenny has in store for him.

Fantastic, light and entertaining.  The tingly feelings of Jenny and Jimmy came easily of the page and ito the mind.

Please continue

Another wonderful part to this ongoing serial. Just hope it continues at a quicker pace, but don't we all wish that? Giggle, giggle.

Huggles
Angel

Part two lives up to the very exciting promise that part one implied.  This is so sweet yet so powerfully erotic.  The hero(ine)discovers the seductive poweer of female garments in a way that is both realistic and arousing.
I look forward to the further development of our hero(ine) as he is treated to more delights of the power of female dressing.
Cordially,
Mardee

A REAL CUTE STORY SO FAR. PLEASE DO NOT STOP AS IT IS NICETO READ A STORY WITH OUT THE TRASH STUFF.

oh i love this story it is so good dont stop, please let jimmy have the time of his young life .

lol sears catologs wish i had my stack back

    love tammie

Terriffic story Beffy. You've done a great job! Just one thing, though. Don't keep us in suspence so long, hehe. Do keep up the good work though. I look forward to reading the next installment. :-)

What a bravura start for a new writer!
This well wtitten story grabs the reader's attention from teh very fits.
The descriptions are so yummy that the characters just come to life.
Do write more.
Cordially,
Mardee

Great story so far. Would love to see what happens next
to jimmy.

Well, you seem to have caused quite a stir !  Lots and lots of comments already - I concur with most people already commenting - yes please, more more more....

Great story so far please continue!!

Great story so far.  I love the characters and the story development so far.  The layout and other technical aspects are great too.  I look forward to reading more.

LOVE it!
Boys in ballet has always been a thrill of mine.  You seem to like your story-boys in tights... and im HOPING you continue this little gem!

Great start!  Good character intros, and the story has lots of directions it could go.  Keep it up!

i luv this story.  With his boy clothing supply so limited, you have a logical situation for many borrowing opportunities to arise.  Please continue it.  

A very good beginning, promising lots of exciting fun for Jimmy.
BUT...the summary says this story is complete. I hope not; very
little has happened so far.  If you are indeed going to continue,
as I hope you will, see if you can observe a ballet class so you
avoid the common pitfalls: girls the age of your characters do NOT
wear tutus to class; they wear tights & leotards.  A boy will be
welcome in class, but only as a boy, not posing as a girl. I don't
know whether your intend your girls to do pointe, but they have to
be at least 12 or 13 for that (past menarche, at any rate), & to
have had at least three years' training. So don't put Jimmy on
pointe. Avoid these common mistakes & you'll have a truly wonderful
story. And how many of us would LOVE to be in his shoes!
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--Pervy

fun story will be exciting to see whare our little ballerina ends up......

Great start and you have the well-educated crowd all abuzz! Giggle, giggle.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Huggles
Angel

Yes a great story. I like the guys reaction to everything going on and that the story is passive.

Great story so far!  Please keep it going.  I'm looking forward to the next installment.  
Thanks alot!

I really hope you carry on with this story. It has been so much fun so far. Thanks, Sally.

A good well written story.  I look forward to the next installment.  
And thank you for the effort in the writing.  The lack of typos and great punctuation really make reading this story a pleasure.  Thank you.

I love this story so far.  A very good start. Cant wait till see what happens when he wakes up(hehe). I just wish I could take his place. Oh well we all cant get that lucky. Looking forward to the next part. tata