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Ballroom Dancer
by Lauran Travis

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Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 05/05/09
Great story. My partner & I are ballroom dancers and do fancy ourselves to be reasonably good. To dance backwards and in heels being lead as you circle the floor with a great skirt flowing around your legs is like no other feeling and hard to describe. To be able to dance competitively and move in heels as Fiona did has to be the thrill of a lifetime for a dancer.
I do hope that Fiona comes back and does more dancing and moves with Daryl. It would make a great continuing saga.
Lisa

Comment by rone welles on 02/09/08
 This is a fun story  and the story line was grate .... to pull off this dance switch can only be a dream ....
thank you for writing and sharing with us....



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