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Bambi
by Jennifer White

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Comment by jjconn on 05/31/17
this an interesting story but it sucks that none of the guys had any remorse for the fact that Jeff stole Heather in the first place so nobody learned anything!! Bryan was head over heels for Heather & Jeff stole his best friends girl & none of them showed any loyalty to their freind Bryan? maybe they were'nt real freinds to begin with????

Comment by Don Clarissa on 08/13/12
Loved it!  I like your "bimbo" stories they are some of the best ones of your work!!!

Comment by blah on 12/22/08
Sounds like someone didn't actually read the whole story.  There is someone named Bambi.

I think the revenge would have been more satisfying if he had left Bryan with more awareness than he had in the end.  Not enough to stop his nymphomania, but enough to know what happened to him.


Comment by Paula on 11/05/03
good story but one of the girls should of been called Bambi. I don't think in the new naming that one was giving the title name



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