I didn't like, bad story.
Silvia.

Minty Fresh.  Really do not know what to say.  This is a classic story, one which is reminiscent of such works about Female Supremacist dystopias such as Thomas Berger's "Regiment of Women" or John Wyndham's "Consider Her Ways".  One of your strongpoints is characterization.  Generally I prefer short stories or novels that are less dark and more positive in mood even though dealing with the supremacy of Females, male feminization and role reversal of the sexes, ones in which the diminisment and shame of the male is somewhat tauntingly light and laughable.   However, this work is still EXCELLENT!!!

BRAVO!  

   A very strange setting yet you have made this believable. I hope you are not serious that the tale is over yet I think you are. I would expect now that you have set the stage and we understand what is going on you would have at least two or three more parts. That would be nice. Really like Bambi, just like a child lost in the woods a very sympathetic character, desparate, confused, simple and yet in some ways complex.

   Very creative and unusual slant and good writing as well Minty. Love your moniker by the way, also very creative. Really surprised I would like this type of story but thought I would, as you can make anything interesting. Thank you very much.

   Hugs,

   Kristi