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Barbies Diary
by Angel 6

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Comment by Johnny Guido on 02/10/21
thought the story was good!!  I will say, that there could be a section where the real girls get a hold of the diary and make new entries.

Comment by jim on 08/13/11
One of the best I've read.

Comment by Silvia   (from Brazil) on 06/25/10
I agree with Yoron  (06/03/08)
Silvia.

Comment by Angel OHare on 02/22/10
I was curious to see what the author that uses my screen name with the addition of a 6 at the end was writing about.

First, you need a proof reader at least Angel6.

Second, well, if you would like some help making this a better story then just drop me a PM at the Big Closet.

I have a reputation to uphold you know... Giggle, giggle...

Huggles Angel6

Angel O'Hare


Comment by john on 06/24/08
not my type sorry

Comment by Yoron on 06/03/08
Kind of disgusting.
A ugly story line bordering on the insane.
And the technical qualities of your writing leaves a lot to wished for.

Can't say I'm impressed.

cheers
Yoron.


Comment by juliej on 04/14/08
I have read this story its a heavey but intersting story the line is going very well and it will be intersting to se how much further step mother will go i would like to read about ashley putting up a fight rather than just acepting this good story



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