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Barbie's Gift
by Donna Allyson

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Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/31/06
I just re-read this and stand by my earlier comment.  How can this be rated "Sweet and sentimental" ??  This is a true forced femme story.  Not only was ken's life stolen so was his dad's and his dad's wife's and so on.

Comment by Paula on 08/01/03
Nice story but I would of refered the two remaining to remember since they did after the change rather than them having no memory in the end.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/01/03
EVIL!   Ken's life stolen.  Sure he's happy, a little magic to "help her adjust", translated brainwashing!  Where was Ken's guardian angel??

Comment by Hope on 08/01/03
Nice.



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