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by Starhawk

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Comment by Angie on 08/11/14

Oh you beast! You've got to finish the story! I know this is a work of fiction, but you had me crying at the end.

Comment by paul on 09/29/08

Thank you i enjoyed this story and others to do with Erin. Please is there a sequel?

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 04/22/07

Great story, though Starhawk had me rooting for Rae over Erin, the opening awards show scene notwithstanding.
Eric

Comment by Vivien on 01/01/05

Wonderful, just absolutely wonderful! When I read a story like that I find that I do not want to return to reality in any way shape or form! More please!?

Vivie

Comment by Kathryn Taylor on 07/01/04

A story about real people(albeit with complex lives). I don't know if this has happened to you, but occasionally I will be watching or reading something and I get the fealing that I am intruding, that's the kind of story that moves me. A story that could even have a sad ending but still make you happy.

Sadly there are to few good works of fiction in any genre, can we have more please. There do appear to be possiblilies for a sequel, specially considering Erin's profession.

Thanks for the pleasure of the read.

Kathy

Comment by Dee Eon on 03/17/04

Starhawk:

I love these stories about demure ultra-feminine she-males who are quiet and coy about their truth but so absolutely fetching and GG-natural in poise that even straight hunks are won over. If more TGs were like these the general TG movement would earn a lot less derision from the world at large than from the butchy "in your face" crowd! Your story reads like a travellog and makes me want to grab my luggage! A sequel is due!

XXX
Dee

Comment by maryjane on 02/22/04

Great story Starhawk. Please do a sequel!

Comment by Cassandra on 01/16/04

I was thrilled, enchanted, and so sad. You drew me into this lovely,complex story so well, I vicariously lived it with you. You descrided the locales so wonderfully, I just know you have lived there...I've just visited.

Thank you ever so much for such a well-written story. I loved it!

Comment by Karen E. Lea on 01/15/04

Hi from Sydney Australia. A great story, well written. I hope there is a sequel. Love is a wonderful thing.

Love Karen.

Comment by Lynna on 01/15/04

I have enjoyed this story very much.
I do hope there will be yet another chapter?

Comment by Laurie S. on 01/14/04

A wonderful story! It's complex, and like real life, there are some difficult decisions to be made.

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