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Bikini Beach: If I Should Die Before I Wake
by Jezzi Belle Stewart

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Comment by Andrea Foster on 04/03/05
I don't know how I missed this before. It's certainly different and challenging. I had to read it three times before I got it straight in my head.

It seems to me that the implication is that people transformed by the park's magic actually become new and different selves, rather than just being physically transformed... Fascinating idea.

Comment by Nellie D on 06/19/01
A very different BB story. A story that took much imagination to create. The twists and turns of two lives intertwined because of the actions of a loved one.



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