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Bikini Beach: Swim Date
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Colin on 08/12/10
IT WAS SO FUNNY! Could not stop laughing, and read it in 30 min!!!!!!
I wish magic did excsist though?! I really wished at the end that he stayed Paula it would have been a great funny ending, but keep writing the same stuff lovin it!
Comment by Paul GF on 09/08/07
A great story with a flavouring of sentimental them without being sickly sweet.
Paul gets an 'education' at BB better than he'd ever have at any school.
The piece where Paula 'comforts' the new member of BB is a nice touch!
I also like it where Paul/Paula's relationship improves  following the weekend at BB. And Paul's decision to re-visit BB as a sign of acceptance of his femme self and to please his girlfriend is another nice touch.

A Very Good story and a worthy addition to the 'Bikini Beach' collection.

Bikini Beach - A very MAGICAL place in more ways than one!!

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 04/14/03
Ellie this is just so too much...This particular Bikini Beach MUST DEFINITELY be continued...I too would like to read more about Amy and Paula...not to mentiobn what actually happened to the two mallrats...were they the two girls that Amy was talking to at lunch? Please continue this particular Bikini Beach

Barbara Lynn Terry
Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/23/01
It was great to have a new BIKINI BEACH to read. Have a Paul turn Paula character made it especially special for me. It was almost like reading about having myself go to bikini beach.


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