I can't hear anyitnhg over the sound of how awesome this article is.

At last, a tale of forced feminization that ends on a realistic (for a magical tale) high note. I'm so glad that the selfish little prat got what she deserved. Or is that 'he' now?

/giggle.

thanks for posting sugar, we need more of these stories around to counteract all the negative ones.

Oooooops! I guess I have to 'WHITE' out the smith in the coughs. Don't you just hate it when that happens.   Tee! Hee!

                             Dani

Hi sweety,

  Love your stories, luv that style. I am so happy that there is another person on the same wavelength as me. Also I just have to applaud your posts on some of the least desireable authors, Not to name names (Cough! cough! smith! Cough!) sorry, terrible cold.

 Keep up the great work. Oh! Please stop by my page! I would be honored to be read by you!  You can find me under Dani.

   Luv ya!   don't change!

                                Dani

Compared with the author's "If I Die Before I Wake", this is a much more straightforward BB tale, but it's still got plenty to enjoy. It's especially nice to see one of these evil man-hating, mind-controlling life stealers fail and be hoist with her own petard.

Possibly the original Carl took his transformation a bit calmly... Or did the Old Lady engage in a bit of rather self-serving mental manipulation herself I wonder?

Jezzi, this is a good story. It shows justice for the wronged in a non-violent, non-cussing manner...except for a few words you hear everyday. Keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Jezzi, I read this story some time ago and I have no excuse for not writing my appreciation for this tale.  I found it an unusual and very entertaining story.  Please keep writing as you make readers like me very happy.