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The Bear Market
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/02/07
MOON MAIDEN WAS NOT NEEDED FOR THE MISSION. ANY AGENT COULD HAVE HANDLED IT. NO, MOTHER KNEW ABOUT THAT SPECIAL TEA. SHE KNEW THAT IT COULD "CURE" MOON MAIDEN'S AILMENT. WHAT SHE DID NOT KNOW WAS IF MOON MAIDEN WOULD CHOOSE TO STAY AS A WOMAN. MOTHER WAS SHOWING HER LOVE FOR HER FORMER AGENT AND GIVING HER CHANCE TO REJOIN THE AGENCY. SHE STILL OWNS THE STORE AND STILL CRAFTS THOSE WONDERFUL MAGICAL STUFFED ANIMALS.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/01/07
TINA,I SAW WHERE YOU PUT YOURSELF IN THE STORY. I MUST ADMIT, POSTING STORIES ABOUT THE AGENCY TO DISCREDIT IT IS A STROKE OF GENIUS. IF THE AGENCY WAS REAL,[IT REALLY COULD BE], THEN SOWING DISINFORMATION WOULD BE THE THING TO DO. I AM GLAD THAT MOON MAIDEN STAYED A GIRL. COME TO THINK OF IT, I WOULD CHOOSE TO BE A GIRL IF THAT MEANT MY BODY WAS WHOLE AGAIN. I GUESS AL OF HIS OLD CUSTOMERS ACCEPTED MOON MAIDEN'S NEW OWNERSHIP OF THE STORE.[AFTER A GASSING THAT IS,] AS YOU CAN TELL, I REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY. THANKS FOR ANOTHER M.I.N.B. ADVENTURE.



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