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The Beating Heart
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Ralph Schierling on 03/08/22
Totally  a good read, it did put a tear in  my eyes. I did enjoy it.

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Comment by Mariah on 04/26/13
A wonderful story, guess I fell into character with Janet Lynn and when she awoke from surgery and realized Jimmy sound asleep still holding her hand goose bumps tingled through both of my arms as I felt the true love they shared.  This story was written so well my emotions had me living Janet's life.  You have a gifted talent for writing when a reader can actually feel such emotion with just a few well chosen words.

Comment by Sharon on 03/08/10
That was such a beautiful story.

Comment by Stanley on 08/29/09
The title says it all.

Comment by karen keith on 09/13/07
this is the first time i've cried on this or any other tg fiction site, loved this and all you stories!!

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/16/07
Janet, this is my favorite story. If yu do a part 2 Title it " THE BEATING HEART CONTINUES."  Show Janet marrying her man and her relationship with Bill her new dad. perhaps ending with Janet being a Mother [she gets pregnant] and seeing her son become a bride.

Comment by Robin on 04/13/04
This is a very well written story. I hope you continue to write in the future, Janet. You seem to have a great sense of what we girls really love to fantasize about. The attention to detail regarding both the physical and mental attributes of dressing and being a girl are quite accurate.I thought this was truly a very exciting story.



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