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Beauty School Queen
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Comment by Silvia. on 05/19/13
Great story! Very, very good story!!! Comment by sandy on 11/19/08 Nice story.Maybe part 4 coming? Comment by Early June on 10/14/04 This is a nice story, well told. I am glad I got to read the whole thing. You have a nice writing style and you seem to have had a solid plot before you started into the action. Overall, a good job! Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 10/25/03 Really enjoy your story, sort of back to the roots of a basic CD story that is about enjoying everything feminine with lots of the transformation details. It is cute and quite uncomplicated but I enjoy those kinds of stories very much in the general mix. Mom is cool, she is on the same page and has already intuited that she has a daughter not a son, I think. At least she is amazingly accepting, maybe she has had enough time to process the idea of losing a son. Many Mom's would be absolutely heartbroken. Maybe you could address some of the heart issues and show us more of the inside stuff? The struggles that must be going on somewhere? As it is though you are doing well and thank you so much for the loving and caring people that populate your story. Comment by Jimmy on 10/24/03 Not a bad little story. I agree with some of the other comments on the mechanics. How about a rewrite? You could improve on the small mistakes and expand the characters and situations. I think this story has some good ideas but a lot were not use to their full potential. Comment by Anne on 10/24/03 I can't wait to read about Jerre sljping on his first pair of sheer nylons. Comment by Cai on 10/24/03 I liked your story, the ending is still vague enough if you wish to you could continue this tale with another segment about the deepening relationship between Mr. Lou & mother or Dawn & Jerrie. Comment by Jill on 10/24/03 Nice start. There are some things that might help your writing. Comment by rhonda on 08/04/03 I think the boy will have fun going out shopping,how about going on a trip dressed as a girl for a fun vacation,or take up square danceing,I would like to model for a dress shop to earn money for collage,maybe be a car hop,get out there and strut that stuff,make some money with what you learned,Good story, rhonda Comment by Michelle on 08/02/03 Fantastic start of a (hopefully continuing) story. The story line has a ring of realism to it and I would hope that you will be continuing it very soon Comment by Pervette on 07/31/03 I liked it. Short but sweet, a pleasant handling of one of my Comment by bonnie on 07/31/03 loved your story - hope this is just part one. Too few stories out there exploring the the special bond created by, and the erotic undertones of, a mother feminizing her son. Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 07/31/03 This story could be fun, but it is not finished. Still it is starting out good. Thanks, Sally. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/30/03 This story was marked as complete, yet it ends before anything really happens, and there are no salon hair or makeover scenes. I certainly hope the "complete" was a mistake and this is only part 1. While the start is good, I think it would have been more interesting if our hero(ine) had never had any TG thoughts or dressed and agreed to be his mom's hair/makeover model reluctantly, sloooooowly coming to like it |
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