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Becoming
by Desiree Is Down Here

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Comment by julih on 02/01/13
intrestingstory so hard to understand at first then got the idea

Comment by Les Weston on 03/27/07
A fantastic story, I really enjoy stories that make me want to be in the hero's shoes. I would trade places with him in a heart beat.
 PLEASE continue with this story. Would love to see you modify the hero more. Suggest you feminize him more, force him into a corset and permanent high heel shoes. Some piercings and tattooing would also be very nice. Modifing his mouth by removing his teeth, splitting and piercing his tongue and lining his lips with pierced rings would also be a very nice touch.

Comment by juliej on 06/01/04
what a naive man allowing himself to be taken down the garden path so to speak, no longer a man but a combinanation of she/male great story more please

Comment by Pammy on 11/06/03
God, I love this story, Please, Please, Please continue...can't wait for the next installment!!! XOXO Pammy

Comment by shy surfer on 11/06/03
Great story!  Looking forward to the continuing transformation of your main character.  Thanks.



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