lhkoQA Way cool! Some very valid points! I appreciate you penning this write-up and also the rest of the website is extremely good.

bvjFX5 I am so grateful for your article post.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

good story well followed up thankyou

Your Story is JUST like You... it ROCKS!!!!! Keep up the Great work, gurl! Love, "jeannette" (jojo2298@yahoo.com)

What a wonderful story. The transformation is so smooth and wonderful. I keep trying to anticipate what will happen next and yet you keep me enthralled. Please do continue writing this saga. Your pace is perfect, your story line keeps me glued to the page and feel as if I am living it myself. I stay so warm and fuzzy while reading. I can't wait for the next sequel, further developments and potential consequences involving everyday life at work and home. I do hope there is not a breakup on the horizon between Bethany and Lisa even if there is some man to come on to Bethany (and she were to get involved with him). Thank You for your story!

Lovely sequence......  Just enough detail and just enough conversation........  I'd like to read more of Bethany's thoughts while this is all going on - deep down inside - and pleeeease,  let her grow her hair so it's her's we're reading about when Lisa completes her look!  LOL WbG xx

Please continue! What "duties" await Bethany at her new job? Entertaining clients? More please!

An excellent story.  Bethany is developing at the perfect pace, and I encourage you to continue.

Your writing really is a cut above the usual. I hope you write some more. Maybe something a bit more dramatic?

Please continue Bethany's story.  I'd like to see her get into acting (my profession) so she can wear more delicious period outfits.

a really great start to this story its amazing how she got him dressed what a waty to go i wish it could have been me brilliant cant wait for next part

    Really enjoyed this cute story. Well written, especially in terms of drawing pictures for us to see and enjoy. You have left us at a cusp here and would be a crime to not allow us to follow the transition. Please post more episodes. Looking forward to several more.

    Hugs, Kristi  

what a superb story line - continuing on from your earlier 'southern belle' theme.

I hope you manage to add more and keep the level of detail up to these standards.

Aspects of dealing with feminine attire / make-up when in normal daily life is of great interest - I expect to many other readers besides me.

many thanks for your work - it really is appreciated

Lovely, lovely story! I am so jealousand cannot wait for her further adventures!  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

I love it!  I can't wait to see where the story goes.  It nice how it moves little by little.  The story almost tells itself.  I can't wait to read more!  Joanne Curl

Terrific story.  I am so glad that you continued the "Southern Belle" saga.  I can hardly wait for the next chapter.  You have a great way with words!!!

Have a wonderful day!!!!

Donna

What a great story. I love the way your character describes the experience of wearing a lined skirt. More please!