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Becoming Debbie
by Debra Lynn Messer

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Comment by jjconn on 07/03/17
MAID FOR SEX - is bill that stupid? when she moved him to a new room-he should have found some mens clothes gathered up debbies clothes, gone to a lawyer to show them the clothes the wife wanted him to wear, file for divorce & leave after settlement & do it himself!! she obviously doesn't love him & he doesn't need her!!!

Comment by Aleesha on 08/20/09
Not good, not bad.

Comment by juliej on 07/25/06
i refer to my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 05/24/04
well the story is simular to some of the others not bad writing still interesting but the same theme and style is as the other stories could do better i feel change the therme a bit more but quite well written

Comment by cassandra on 08/22/03
Honey, did you really think no one would recognize your recopying Good-Bye Robert? Didn't you like it the first time? Shame on you trying to pass off this story as an original work!!

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