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Becoming DeeDee
by DeeDee Pauca

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Comment by wendy k hill on 09/13/23
It's been a long time between you writing and me reading But it is so so good it is like war and peace a time-bomb Just WONDERFUL !!!  Love Wendy XXX

Comment by sissygrace on 08/09/14
This is the best story on Crystal's story site. I love the development
from novice and pubescent male to a full blown slut she-male, with
descriptioms of the various outfits.  the progressions of high and
higher heels. complete with nylon types was wonderful. Good on yah

Comment by elain on 11/25/13
i have read this story six ore seven times and it turns me on i wish a lovley aunt would turn me in to a sexy transvesite in nice sexy clothing love elain

Comment by elaine on 03/25/13
i wish i had an aunt who would dress me like this realy love to dress in sexy underware and fully fastion black nylones

Comment by Sindy Larue on 11/17/11
By far the best story i have read ! Sindy

Comment by Essy on 09/19/11
I thank you humbly for sharing your widosm JJWY

Comment by Susana on 02/03/10
I can't say anymore than has already been said, other than you have one more dedicated fan.  Please write more!  Your sweet and gentle way of developing a wild and kinky story, and written so professionally, makes your work some of the very best in Crystal's library.

The Library thankfully fills the needs of such a variety of fantasies, temperaments, personalities, moods, and cravings in our community, that it probably reduces crime rates greater than the entire Los Angeles Metropolitan Police Force.  I've always felt "To each his own", but when I escape to the library I want to go to MY PLACE where I can HAPPILY enter an alternate life.  Not forcibly, not evasively, or any other method against my will.  And your story makes a direct hit on one of my fantaasies, matching my usual temperament and personality, and gets me or keeps me in a happy mood.  And as far as cravings, I usually have none for explicit sex descriptions because they so often feel so added on or subtract from the story line.  But in your case it became a needed part of the explanation of how a sexual novice came from his preconceived notions of what sex should be, to what his aunt hoped she could convince him what it could and maybe should be.  And she did it with love and never force.

Your very close attention to your story line, syntax, grammar, and spelling made this piece a delight to read.  So often potentially good works on this site are severely hampered by not having a simple read through by a thoughtful friend before submitting.  There were only two times in nearly a hundred pages that I had to pause to get your meaning (and one of those only took a minute to back-track and find that this 'Bambi' character was actually Barbi).  Your work makes a very easy, enjoyable read.

I love you and your work dearly...  as I do Crystal and hers.  May all your fantasies, that you want, come true.  God bless you.

Susana

P.S.  While reading over what I had just written I realized I must have had a Blonde Moment... stating that I didn't have anything to add then proceeding to immediately blabber on for a page.  Well you know us Girls! - and I couldn't type that on many other sites!
 


Comment by Bruce on 03/28/09
You seem to have aroused a lot of us old geezers, im 62 straight and loved the entire story.  keep up the good writing and have a good life

Comment by cindy on 08/17/08
Wow what a lovely story, the only thing missing was frilly pretty aprons, especially pretty plastic aprons,oh well good story. LOVE CINDY

Comment by Tinesilk on 02/15/06
Absolutely wonderful.  Other authors should take note of the content and imagery here.  Fulfills many TG fantasies...

Comment by dave on 09/04/05
thank you, please write more , best story/sex/mix i have ever read. kept me glued to the screen. loved the character developement, the gradual introduction of tv to deedee, and i want more please.

Comment by EdBear on 02/02/05
This is the sexiest piece of fiction that I have ever read.  I couldn't find it for years, and by luck I found it today.  Never to make that mistake again, I copied it to my hard drive.  Thanks so much from a 65 year old with a lingeie fetish!

Comment by toni on 08/21/04
You and Georgina are the best.  DeeDee is so lucky

Comment by Donna Dee on 02/28/03
 It is hard to beat the comments you have already received so I won't even try, but I just had to add my two pennyworth.  This is THE best CD yarn ever,  now then, where are my clean panties?
Donna

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 01/25/03
Loved this last story. The first one wasn't bad, but the second one was a real turn on. And that from a 72 year old CD.. Love
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Comment by patrick on 07/30/02
awesome story

Comment by Alice on 01/21/02
I have relicated every step in this delicious transformation, but with my sister rather than my aunt. It began with her teasing me, flasing a little skin,and leaving her used, sexy panties in the bathroom, and then progressed to her routinely walking around the house braless with a sheer thong. The next step was to teach me how to satisfy a girl; we have actually played out every scene, and this led to us making love while I was all femmy. The final stage was outing me as a girl, but with a big, hard cock that she weould use whenever she wants.There is one difference in the story and my experience; sis is now pregnant and is planning for me to be the mother.Although she is 7 months pregnant, we still fuck every day just like DeeDee and Aunt Bunny.

Comment by Jasmine on 11/10/01
I must have blown my load several times over this story...DeeDee, you've gotta do more! And I've still got a raging erection! Excuse me, I gotta go pull my pantyhose down again and...well, you know :)

Jasmine

Comment by Rita Mondray on 11/10/01
I've always considered this story to be one of the all time classics. I'm so happy it has been posted to this site. Hard to believe this was a first time story! Dee Dee, I hope we hear plenty more from you in the future! You are one talented writer! I will always be a fan!

Warmest regards,
Rita Mondray

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 11/10/01
The hottest story posted on this site!  An absolute classic.  Well-written and steamy as h-e-hockey sticks.  I love to see the young lad gradually introduced to sex and femininity in the most delightful way ever put to paper (or whatever this stuff is).  Read it with caution.  Your panties will tent and moisten instantly and I can't guarantee that they won't rip.



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