Hope you continue the story, it's really good!

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nWAGJt I am so grateful for your article post.Thanks Again. Much obliged.

A GREAT STORY BUT NOT END WHY... ?

Truly wished you would finish them. Sounds like poor Dana is in for it. =) But she will eventually love the life.

This is plagarism, clear and simple.  Robbie posted this EXACT same story at FM, on 9/28/05.  Names are different, but they are the SAME otherwise.  Even the title is the same.  Shameful.  

Please can you finish these
They are really good

Please i beg you to continue these, they are by far one of the best stories on this website
Please

these stories are very special to me. please...please continue your story telling. and thank you for sharing them...!!

Scary. But gets me off.

a good story to start with and so far so good but it needs to be continued

It looks like this could turn out to be a great story. The only thing i don't like that much, is that annie seems to enyoj dressing and refeering dameon as a girl to much. And if there will be any kind of intimesi,(seriulsy doubt i spelld that right) i hope it will not include any boys except for the main character. That kind of ruins any good story i have ever read.

enjoyed this one but would like to see part 4. * being graded 4 seems a little funny...grade 6 perhaps

quite a story apart from the accident of his parents it seems to me to be a set up its intersting the way its working out but taking hormones which was thought to be vitamins very intersting i cannot believe the way its written a great story and i look forewards to reading more in b=due course welldone

Well, I also have my problems with people who think situations are "premeditated."  Of course they are!  We begin with a boy and finish with a girl, and the circumstances and temperaments have to make this seem possible. Probable hopefully, plausible at least.  And step by step, you've set the conditions for a plausible reluctant if helpless transformation.  I love it!  This has all the prerequisites for a charming forced transformation -- because occasionally resisted -- of a woefully inadequate boy into a charming member of an all-girl family.  It's as nice a fantasy as "The Princess Bride," no more premeditated than all those stories of beautiful little girls who marry handsome Princes.  And for good reason -- we cherish the desire.  I look forward to Dane taking pride in his feminine attributes as he acquires them, maybe unawares, maybe despite himself. No need for magic -- hormones will shrink a pre-pubescent penis, and stress will too (it pulls in and hides itself).  You go girl!

WARNING - SPOILERS AHEAD

I agree with the other reviewers that the situation does seem premeditated and too contrived.  Annie works for a store that only sells feminine clothing and furnishings that she gets for free?  Annie gets to send her "girls" to an all girls school for free?  Dameon/Dana just happens to be underdeveloped and undersized at 15?  His penis starts shrinking after only a few days of taking the "vitamins"?

Notwithstanding these complaints, the story is well written for a first time poster.  I don't mean to discourage Jaygee.  I hope she continues to write and improve her stories.  And notwithstanding my doubts I have enjoyed the first three episodes and I definitely look forward to reading future installments.

SS

Can't wait to see the next installment

I am hopeful that Dane(Dana) will end up in a happier ending then what appears to be the ending it's heading for, but still, a very good first story,

no matter how it turns out, thanks for sharing it

Enjoyed ready the story but is there a concludion to this story?

I agree with Jezzi. This all seems so premeditated, and Annie seems like the obvious wich she is. Annie knew from the start what she was going to do with little Damien, or Dana as Annie now calls "her?" I am waiting with bated breath for chapter 4. Nice work on all three chapters too, byt the way.

Barbara Lynn Terry
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Absolutely loving this story good job! I'm really looking forward to more installments (Hopefully many)  Thanks Dani

I wondered how the ladcies were regressing him mentally and changing him physically.  From this part 3 with the disappearing penis and appearing vagina, it sounds like magic and mindfuck going on here or medical technology beyond what is present in current RL.  Sure seems premeditated.  Is the whole story of his parents putting him in their care a fake and he was picked simply for his potential for successful feminization and age regression?  Are they just out and out evil or have they rationalized that they are doing it for "her" own good.  If they have magic and or high tech capabilities, then the whole "we're too poor" business must be false also.  This is getting very, very sinister.  WELL WRITTEN, dear; can't wait for part 4