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The Beginning
by Deborah Leigh Johnson

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Comment by Sally on 10/19/09
I like the way you write.

Comment by brian on 01/08/07
great story , can only dream it could happen to me

Comment by Matthew on 11/18/05
Wonderful Story enjoyed reading it.

Comment by Kristen Ward on 02/24/05
Fabulous story Deb

Comment by Diane Sutton on 05/23/02
Nicely done story with a good plot line that is a joy to read.

Diane

Comment by Sissy Priscilla  Valentine on 08/24/01
Lucky, Lucky little Karen!

Great story Deb!


Kisses!


Sissy Prissy
XOXO



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