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Being Caught
by Nicole Louise

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Comment by mike on 07/21/09
susan has all her dreams fulfilled.from the first kiss which defines how badly she wanted a man.to holding her first cock.she now totally knows what it is to be a woman.great story.

Comment by Vicki on 01/06/05
I liked this story VERY much. The humiliation aspects (imagining the comments at work, contemplating speaking to women while still having the taste and smell of cum on the breath) were great. I loved the description of the taste of cum as well. It reminded me of sucking the dick of a guy in a bookstore. I had thought about wanting dick for a long time. I actually said out loud "I can't believe I am finally going to have a dick in my mouth!".

Comment by terislut on 10/18/04
excellent had my mouth watering! and I've just sucked off three men in a row  

Comment by leah on 10/11/04
A slice of life! One that would have made a better impression with a bit more care in the editing process.

Not bad for a trial flight. Maybe the next one will be a larger, more complex experience.



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