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Being Jill
by Jennifer White

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Comment by k mixon on 06/19/08
Terific,you really take me there,with all your thoughtful details.

Comment by suna on 10/31/06
An odd story,  I'm not sure wether there really is a Jill or just some malevolent parasite.  Having done the change 5 times should mean something ... maybe taking more time to choose a mate .. and now a baby too ?  that you could have left out.

Not one of your better works but it did make me think.

Thanks.


Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/06/04
What an imagination you have!  A terrific transformation nightmare/fantasy -- sort of like a cross between "Being John Malkovich", "Pamela's Voice", and "Dr. Jekyll and Sister Hyde."  Just the right length and the proper tone.

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Paula on 01/06/04
fantastic story what a twist at the end.



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