bsDhGu I truly appreciate this post. I ave been looking all over for this! Thank goodness I found it on Bing. You ave made my day! Thanks again.

Well written Zoe. Sexy, yet sensible - you don't get that on this site often! I really like the way you resolved everything.

Please write some more.

Adorei seu conto ... leio aqui do Brasil e amei muito.

Parabens pela historia e pelos momentos felizes que passei lendo.

Marvelous Finale.  I thought it was poignant and accessible and very special indeed.

Love and Huggs,
Sheryl S.

loved the way it played out.  i do wish it wasn't over, but it was a great story.  looking forward to more.

love the way you are playing this out, but wish you couldgo a little further with each part- its hell waiting on the next segments.  keep it up girl

Zoe, dear,

I am thoroughly enjoying this tale and can hardly wait for part 3 to be posted. Your writing is clear, consise and easy to follow.

You have done so well in  portraying lovers who love each other yet are caught in societal and other 'speed bumps'. At one and the same time they love each other but are ashamed. You have shown great sensitivity in this matter.

Now that Chloe is interjected into this mix, and she wants to see Steve in the Angels Collection panties, we can only wonder what else she has in store.

Thanks for a really nice story.

Hugs,

Cassandra

very sweet

Zoe ... Very nice story, but particularly good is that you had protection used in the lovemaking. So many stories completely ignore the great dangers in lack of protection. You would do everyone a great service by continuing to keep this aspect in your stories. By the way, you could use a spell checker. Why not get a free email checker from the net? Using Google, you should find a lot available. Or you could purchase a checker for your email setup. I liked the sex in that it came quickly, but seemed natural. Hope you write a lot more ... Kisses and hugs, Melody

It's a nice enough romance, but ...

Only a "R"????  That was a rather graphic description of anal intercourse for an "R" rating.

Deni

Blame me for lack of imagination, but I have genuine difficulty seeing how you are going to maintain the high attractiveness of this piece in apparently forthcoming chapters.

I don't even remember the names of the two involved, so intent was I on the unfolding of the story (but a couple of rereads will take care of that!). While the ending to some may seem a bit maudlin or over-sweet, I felt the thoughts expressed were all too real. This will be a nice standard to shoot for as the history/herstory develops.

Nice start, Zoe!            leah

Zoe, I just love this story, and can relate to it so much.  It is fresh and genuine, and I look forward to reading the next.  Just one think I thought maybe you might like to try is to slow down the action and plot development just a tad so that you can richen the texture of our heroine's environment, feelings, and reference points.  But, maybe that's just because I was enjoying it so much that I didn't want it to end too soon.  

In any event, your contributions are just so welcome to the Storysite, and I cannot wait to read more.  Keep up the good work, Sister Zoe!

Love,
Sheryl S.
xoxo

i don't know if the part about being too unpassable to go out is your own, but girl, i can relate.  the rest of it is very nice and i am looking forward to more parts