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Ben's Girls
by Gwengirl

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Comment by Joni on 12/12/11
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Comment by Diane Sutton on 10/17/01
A very good story with a nice format. I enjoy when someone is made to do things by a mind altering scheme and this was one of them.
I did notice a few mistakes with a spelling or grammar but, that in no way detracts from the story as a whole.
I look forward to reading the next story from this author.

Comment by Gina on 08/02/01
Thank you, I enjoyed this story very much.

Comment by Jennifer on 07/27/01
Interesting twist and kind of fun.

I did not like the dumbing down at the end.  Think you could have made better characters by developing them to keep their IQ.


Comment by Raji on 07/27/01
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