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The Best Day Ever
by Lori J Windom

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Comment by Emma on 03/03/12
A really beautiful story. I hope you find the time to write part 2, please...

Love, Emma


Comment by kris on 03/23/11
you are sexy and beautiful

Comment by Paula on 10/07/09
OMG, girl! What a story for the ages... Let Chrissy fly to the moon. Please write more. Paula

Comment by ALISON MARY on 10/04/09
Lori,you have the basis of a lovely story here,so don't be shy about continuing the next chapter---I'm sure I'm not the only one waiting
to see what you have in store for us,so go for it girl!!May God bless
and protect you,Alison.

Comment by carol ann on 09/04/09
What a lovely story.   How so mayof us wish we could have such an understanding mother and sister.  Please let us have the next chapter

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 09/02/09
WOW!!!!! Amazing, terrific!
What a lovely story you wrote. I loved!
Please, write more, and more, and more........
A lot of kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by kris on 08/27/09
Hi Lori, I love your story as you also. I wish something like that would happen to me where all of the pretties are there for the taking.    Love you Lori, Kris

Comment by Sharonn on 08/23/09
Where did you go?  It's been a year and nothing.  Please continue.  Seems to have good reviews.
Sharonn

Comment by Geena on 09/26/08
Dear Lori,

What a truly lovely story.  It was so touching, that I too, had tears in my eyes by the end of this first of hopefully many wonderful chapters of Chris's growing life as a CD girl.  I only wish that my mom and sister were the same, but back in the 50's, life was far from that of today.

Anyway, it was only today that I read this, and wanted to let you know how much I loved it!  I truly hope that you will provide more either on this site or others.

Huggers!
Geena


Comment by Lesley on 09/18/08
Lori

What a beautiful story and how lucky chrissy was. This is the scenario that many of us would have loved to have had. Such loving mother and sister both so caring and so prepared to helChrissy on her way.

Will surely love reading the next ppart

Lesley


Comment by juliej on 09/14/08
great story second read well worth continuing

Comment by Rose on 09/12/08
Hi Lori,
   What a great story. How envious am I. I just wish that I was in Chris's place, and what a great Mom and sister. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Luv Rose


Comment by WannabeGinger on 09/01/08
Lovely beginning... lucky girl, Chrissie......  Let me add my support to Jessica's comment.... Please just let him love him/herself and enjoy cross-dressing.   No dating guys,  no TG surgery,  no forcible humiliation... just joyful,  pretty pleasures!
LOL WbG.  xx

Comment by Maid Joy on 08/31/08
Lori, I can't wait to see more of this story.  I love it and it's so sweet.  Please, get more up there as fast as you can.

Comment by juliej on 08/25/08
a sweet story to start the day it should be intresting how things progress

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 08/25/08
Lovely story. I hope to read more of Chrissy's travels as soon as possible. Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by Janice Lynn on 08/22/08
A darling way to start a cute story. Chris/Chrissy can go to school as a girl, live as a girl and has his/her Mother and Sister supporting her. Looking forward to reading more of this story of Chris.

Comment by Pat on 08/21/08
Wonderful, I can hardly wait to read more.

Comment by Annalise Barker on 08/21/08
Hi Lori,

What a lovely sweet story you have written. Congratulations to you girl. I do hope you continue in this vein and allow Chrissy to explore her feminine side and become good friends with a nice girl on campus.

lots of love,
Annalise


Comment by Amy on 08/19/08
Dear Lori,
What a wonderful story line which I only hope is the beginning.  The exploration of her femme side, enjoying just being a girl.  I also look forward to her gradual becoming more femme and wearing more  girlie things t oclass.  I just  cannot wait.  Amy

Comment by Amy on 08/19/08
What a great beginning to a hopefully wonderful story. I think the story line is what every t-girl dreams of.  I can't wait until Chapter 2 is released!

Comment by CDSharon on 08/18/08
Looking forward to Chapter #2 to be able to live like that would be wonderful.
Hope to see it soon.

Comment by Jessica on 08/18/08
L A U R I E,   Kisses
 This Such A Sweet Start.  I Can't Hardly Wait For
Chapter 2.  All I Ask Is That Chris Does Not Begin
To Date Guys As Is So Typical Of These Stories.
Please, Let Him Be A Crossdresser, But In Love With
"Other / Real"  Females Only

Comment by Gwen on 08/18/08
What a beautiful story. Please continue.

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 08/18/08
Sweet and enjoyable.  As one of the other reviewers said, this first part makes a nice stand-alone piece, without Chrissy really having to do anything more.  (I wonder how much her father knows...)

Eric


Comment by Sarah H. on 08/16/08
Very good beginning with lots of great possibilities.

Comment by Penny on 08/16/08
Lovely start, I really enjoyed reading it, and look forward to the next instalment.


Comment by hippie cheerleader on 08/16/08
Dear Lori: Yes, very sweet. I look forward to reading more about Chrissie's college life-- maybe she'll join the cheerleading squad!!??
This is more of a brief character study than a "story"-- there's no real plot yet. but maybe you intended this first installment just to serve as an introduction to your hero/heroine and his/her background and to spark the interest of readers. That's how it's working for me. I look forward to reading future chapters and wish you all the best with your writing endeavors. Myself, I'm a free lance music journalist but have never tried writing fiction.
Peace-- hippie cheerleader.  


 




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