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Best Served Cold
by Mistress Cindi

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Comment by rone welles on 08/13/07
 Well what happens next ?  take it to the next level and let us see the girl and how she gets back at dad ..great story line and you did a good job of that .... thank you for sharing .... Rone Welles

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/27/07
Cindi, Who is the boy? great story so far, Check out janet stickney's stories for ideas.

Comment by juliej on 08/07/05
part 2 was very good and well written i would like to read more as when you can write it thankyou great story so far

Comment by juliej on 10/11/04
this story is great its a bit hard for tom to dress as a girl but ican understand it i look foreward to the next parts in due course and also see him get revenge on his father but in the sence of the tables being turned father in dresses it would be a perfect revenge

Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 12/19/03
This story is excellent and deserves to be finished.  I would like to see the father get his!!!!

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 10/02/03
I love this story so far can you PLEASE continue?

Huggles
Angel



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