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The Bet
by Laura Brooks

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Comment by see pron on 10/26/19
CO4Ryo This is my first time visit at here and i am truly happy to read all at one place.

Comment by Fiona on 07/20/19
A really good read.
I enjoyed the characters

Comment by suba suba on 04/15/19
K0Lg7w Respect to author, some fantastic entropy.

Comment by Miss Fitt on 05/01/18
 What a pleasant change to find a well written plausible story without the usual bad grammar and spelling errors. I hope that you will write many more stories.

Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 04/18/15
Dear Laura, I can't believe, that it's been so many years, since I read to beautiful story. I first learned about this story, when I was active in TCNE.org. (The Tiffany Club of New England)

I'm wondering why, I never posted a note before.

I've always, "loved," this simple story about a husband and wife, who love each other.

And I just wanted to, "say," Hi.

Well written, not rushed.

Sisterly yours,
"Missy," Susan Pauline


Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
DU7XTE Thank you ever so for you article post.Thanks Again. Want more.

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
YPgLie Thanks-a-mundo for the post.Really thank you!

Comment by Mrs. Suvidya Shahane on 11/20/13
A really wonderful story. I appreciate that there is no pornographic sex in it. A real sentimental piece demonstrating love and understanding in the couple.The way , husband fumbles during purchases is great. A fantastic story which will be positively enjoyed by heterosexual cross dressers, who do not appreciate reading differently enjoyed sex. I shall be very happy to read more of similar writings from you.

Comment by seo service on 09/07/13
wRCKeh Fantastic article. Fantastic.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/10/08
the husband learned, if i had a wife and made a bet i would of done it right the first time.

Comment by WannabeGinger on 01/15/07
Beautiful concept - how many of us would wish such a closeness to share......  I like Rachel's idea of hearing the same story from the perspective of Laura's wife

Comment by suna on 02/09/06
I enjoyed your story.  The reasons things happened were clear, putting himself thru the discomfort of making her a gift was wonderful.


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/11/05
Great story!  Lots of love.  One hopes that Sunday was only the first of many shared by them in skirts.

Comment by les on 01/29/05
I liked your story a lot! What I tend to look for on the StorySite are stories with (essentially) happily married people; or at least fully committed heterosexual relationships. While there was strife in this one it all worked out in the end. A very pleasant read. Thanks.

Comment by julie j on 08/21/04
im glad he did not welch in the end on the bet he made with his wife
at last came to terms with it not a bad story would like to read more

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/02/04
Lovely story he must love her very much he did sound like a crossdresser but was man enought to a woman for her.By the in Bristol the girls in shops like Debemhams Evans Anne Havey Bon Mache  Boots are dead cool with TGs and  love to help .Make up girls in Boots and Debemham s are real cool and love to help TGs Thought Rachael might like to know

Comment by Rachael on 07/09/03
I enjoyed the story. I would like to hear it from the wifes side as well. I also wish I could find some understanding shop assistants like those

Comment by lou on 01/23/02
Excellent story!  I wish that I would lose a bet like this.  More couples may be surprised how their lives may change if there would be more role reversals.

Comment by Justine on 11/28/01
     For once, a story where a husband gets dressed up to help understand his wife and to advance their relationship, with no drugs, dominance, sinister conspiracies or hidden agendas in sight. This is much more a true love story (or at least as it relates to my personal experience) than almost anything else I've seen on this site. Keep it coming!

Comment by Annie on 11/28/01
This is a great story. Very sentimental and caring. I read it before and it's just as good the second time. Your writing is very good , how about some more stories.

Comment by Tuessie on 09/22/01
Fabulous and fanny. TV's dream story. Though seems realistic, many
TV's experience somewhat sad stories. Women like to play with TV,
but to have a TV as husband is entirely different matter, my wife
says. Fortunately my wife has accepted and assisted my TV life from
the start, I was lucky.

Comment by darla on 06/03/01
    Great story. I wish that had been me. What a wonderful experience that would be to be able to be girlfriends with your wife.



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