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Betrayal
by Julie O

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Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 04/23/09
I told you're a great writer. Never stop!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Gwen Boucher on 12/26/06
Hi Julie O.

I just love your work. I could easily see your being paid for your work and I hope that is in your plans. I get so involved in your stories that I have often sat up waaaaaay beyond my bed time to finish a story.

Best wishes to you this Christmas.

Gwen


Comment by Lauren on 04/14/05
I read this story somewhere else and it really impressed me.  I just finished reading it again and I am amazed at how much I enjoyed it, again!  I think you are more than a writer, you are a story teller and a moralist.  Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Comment by Early June on 04/05/05
A truly amazing story.  Woven and presented in a professional manner.
 Your attention to details is marvelous.  This story holds attention, creates sympathy, provides justice.   This is about as happy an ending that can result from drug addiction and street living.  Well done.  Thank you for sharing this with us.  All of your stories are so good that I am constantly on the lookout for them.

Comment by Tanya on 03/30/05
Awesome story.  Great job!  I seldom comment on stories I've read, but I really wanted to compliment you.  You held my attention throughout and included well-constructed dimensions that most stories on this site don't have.  I look forward to going back and sampling previous stories that you've written.  Keep up the good work.

Comment by Ron Johnson on 03/28/05
This is another great story! It had a surprise twist ending, in the vein of O'Henry. It sort of made me feel like the bad guy got what was coming to him.

I would enjoy more of these kinds of endings in various stories.



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