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Betrayed By Those I Love
by Angel O'Hare

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Comment by Two sick women on 08/16/18
It is disgusting what can fuel these womem’s desires. Teach both women (fathers too) a lesson. Put them behind bars with a red flag marking them as sexual predators against children. Fellow inmates can deliver their own justice to them. As for the mother, I’d go as far as allowing the general public to lynch her before sending her to prison for the other inmates to devour. There is no excuse for exploiting one’s own children, regardless of what you see in them.

Comment by thisisme on 08/02/13
Incredibly disgusting display of incompetent parenting. I'm still waiting for the third part of the revamped story (rachels trilogy). How selfish of his mom. How much thought has she ever given to the kid other than as a canvas upon which she can devine her fantasies of having a daughter? Far as I can tell the kid never done nothing to noone and is sold out by everyone for their own agendas. When does the kids life become his own?

Comment by Silvia. on 06/27/10
Disgusting.....................
Silvia.

Comment by Jeff on 05/08/08
What a lesson for two fathers to be teaching their boys about how to be men: Doormat 101. Gutless hypocrites, they tell their boys that they will back them up, then when the pinch comes, tell them that they are expected to sacrifice themselves and allow their mothers to play "dress up dollies" with them (where they get to be the dollies) because of all that the boys owe their moms. Rather than teaching the boys to stand up for themselves, they are told to just put up with it until they can run away and escape by going to college. Presumably, this prepares them to find mates in school who will run their lives for them, since their birth parents have surgically removed their backbones so that they can no longer survive nor stand up on their own. 'Betrayed By Those I Love' -- was a story ever more aptly named?

It would be nice to be able to laugh this off as just another fantasy, if it weren't so horribly true to life. Angel's 'How It All Began - Five Years Old' is no fantasy, but a lesson in power. I know that forced fem stories are very popular, but reading about soul murder is always disturbing to me, especially when the fiction so well reflects real life.


Comment by Stanley Morton on 11/19/07
Poor Ricky, now he is forced to be Rachel! Even his new best friend has betrayed him. It will be interesting to see if Ricky is able to win out over everybody or if he has to become Rachel.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 11/19/07
WOW! Poor guys! Their mom's are turning them into girls because Ricky looks like his mother, Rob because his mother seems to want two daughters. I hope the fathers step in before it is too late for the boys. Angel, I hope to see this story at Big Closet soon.

Comment by mcm on 10/23/03
i am not sure if i love or hate the way you manipulate my feelings with your wonderful talent.  Can not wait for book two and more, however, i have a big hole in my entertainment waiting for more of the Queen of the Harvest Moon and Tammy True.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/23/03
Great story; you go, girl!
I am so mad at all the characters (except RICH) I could just spit!  Just what I like!  :-)           Giggle




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