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Better Business
by Gingerfred Man

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Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/23/09
  Loved the story-thank you so much for the giggles.However I think your endophilologists may have ended up with a bad case of
proctodynia----procto(pertaining to the anus) dynia(meaning Pain).
 As long as they enjoyed it!!May god bless you and thank you once again.Alison

Comment by Vicki Stewart on 01/03/09
  Oooo, PLEASE let me know where in the world, this wonderful Company exists, I've been 'CREAMING' my stockings and frilly panties all the way through this story.
 I'm sure it would totally solve the world's unemployment problem!
(World recession??? What recession)!
 Kind regards. Vicki.xxx

Comment by Me on 05/23/08
Oh my, you are just too hilarious. "Endophilology"? BAHAHAHAHAHA...

"endo-": prefix meaning internal, something inside, like an "endoscope" for looking inside the body.

"phil-": the love of something, like "philosophy," the love of knowledge, or "podophilia," the love (fetishistic) of feet.

"-logy": suffix meaning words, logic, or the study of something, like "psychology," the study of the (human) psyche.

So, what's "endophilology"? Loving the study of the great indoors? Loving the study of the interior of... BAHAHAHAHA...


Comment by Lee lee on 04/30/08
ah wow   oh   my   hmmmmmm oh oh oh    what a wonderful story.  My secretary and I traveled to gether for years and often fantasized about finding other couples to play with  ( the closest I came was when she found a singlel man for us both to share one night) your story was such sexual fun and the slow feminine change in our comomentator was priceless  ( I am not gay   but gee I love to suck a cock) and we all knew deep down inside that he was not a gay he was male lesbian...oh and I really identified with the anal kissing  such fun    so naughty   thank you sweeet one for a wonderful story

Comment by monika i on 05/14/02
ive never been on a business trip in my life...does this program really exist?! as usual, g-man constructs a story with so much erotically-charged detail & emotional authenticity you really begin to think its all entirely plausible!

the characters are wonderfully femmy, the sex inventive, & even the dialogue is a turn-on. this is a world where everyone is open to explore all the different aspects of their erotic selves without judgment, & with total acceptance. there is only have 1 gender in this story: & yet every combination of boy & girl!

there is such a wonderful positive spirit to this story (& all this authors stories) that you actually feel uplifted by the end...in more ways than one!

im going to work now...maybe someone in the human resources department read this story this morning as well!  :)



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