What a wonderful story - I was so intrigued, I read the whole set of 19 chapters in one day!

Your sense of compassion shines through in all you have written in this story - whilst it seems impossible on one plane, it seems so utterly realistic.

I have a great deal of sympathy with the subjects of your story, being an occasional cross-dresser with a burning desire to adopt a true female form. Whether I forfeit my sexuality or not depends on many things, as I am in a very complicated relationship. But your story gives true hope and is a fascinating read.

I have written and published several books in my male form, as well as many professional and academic papers, so I can appreciate the task of retaining focus and continuity. You have done well in this work - I shall read more of your stories.

With kind regards,

"Sarah"

just wanted to say this is one of the  best stories i have ever read i still have a few more chapters to read i just finished chapter 13 and will finish the rest tomorrow.  Thanks for writing it and i look forward to reading more of your work.

Well written. Only one minor problem is the age gape between Venessa & Randy. I can't wait to find out who the 2 out casts swap with! I like the fact they will stop anything like that happening in the future.

CAPTER 14 WAS A GOOD chapter ( sorry for caps!) well written & dramtic

While you're taking care of Sharsneggar in Part 12, see if you
can take the "rogue" off her cheeks in part 13.  Oh...& I think
that "courage" a few lines down should be "corsage."
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I don't orginarily criticise people for spellings, since none of
us is perfect, but these are grotesque &, more importantly, show
carelessness in editing. And frankly, a story as brilliantly
conceived & beautifully crafted as this deserves greater care.
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--Pervy

Excellent chapter, very good dramtic prom night. I like the punishment its too ironic! Characterizations are well done!
I forgot to say thanks for changing the names to fit the bodies! It makes too much sense now that they've decided to stay each other!

Excellent chapter, very good dramtic prom night. I like the punishment its too ironic! Characterizations are well done!

I've been enjoying this story tremendously as it has gone on.
The switching of points of view is very well managed, and the
plotting of the story as a whole is excellent. But watch out for
those sentence fragments, & please, PLEASE find out the correct
spelling of "Arnold Sharsneggar"!

--Pervy

I am enjoying the sries. Goiod charcterzations. The story maybe is a little too passive some how. One ting I htink the parents should be calling the two kids by their body's names they might as well get used to it.

I know I was only the second one to post But I want the next part to this story as well!  You are very talented and I hate it when an author doesn't give there reader the whole story even in the end when it looks like no one wants it!  Please finish all your stories!  Even if others don't post it I'm sure they like your stories they just don't know how to express there feelings!

Well you are a talented writer I have to say so far you are the one of the best at leaving us begging for more please add to this soon!

been following this mostly on fictionmania, but read the last two parts here.  love it so far, especially all four perspectives.  hope you keep it coming for a long time.