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Bewitched and Beswitched
by Paula Dillon

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Comment by i love pron on 10/25/19

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Comment by see pron on 04/19/19

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Comment by suba suba on 04/15/19

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Comment by Ravi on 03/19/14

Hi Paula.
You're amazing. You're a great writer,
and I loved your story.
Please keep writing.
Kisses.

Comment by make money online on 09/13/13

jdjB03 Very good article post.Thanks Again. Fantastic.

Comment by Silvia. (from Brazil) on 04/04/10

Hi Paula.
You're amazing. You're a great writer, and I loved your story.
Please keep writing.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Eric on 03/28/07

Enjoyable story. I love the ones were the trickster is tricked.

Comment by Jade on 03/28/07

I like the story and it was well written. But I ended up with one problem like many other authors you think wiccan's is a religon just for females. And you impose it to become sexiest with the boys at the age of three no longer able to stay around the place. If it wasn't for that fact I think I could have come to enjoy this story more.

Comment by Danielle leigh-Anne O'Bryan on 03/26/07

Dearest Paula:
What a wonderful Story. Well written. A real pleasure to read. I hope to see more of you in the future.
One minor detail.... When a wikkan witch goes rogue we call them Warlock. I am not too sure how that term got applied to a man but then again they want everything. Giggle... ;-)
Goddess Bless!
Danielle

Comment by Debbie Gizmo on 03/25/07

That was an absolutly fantastic story of triumph over adversity and of how the greedy dont always get what they want.

Comment by robin on 03/25/07

I really enjoyed this story. That a person so mean could actually get what they deserved was very pleasing to me. It would be nice to see if the original Stacy/roger could learn from her mistakes and become a real person. Keep writing please it is GREAT stuff.

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