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Beyond Mortality
by Ami Lamida

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/22/10
Very good story.
I liked it.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Ami Lamida on 03/04/03
Paul, you should back up your definitive statements with some kind of evidence.  Not everyone shares my views on heaven, but I can back them up.

Comment by Paul on 03/02/03
Angels are none sexed, not male not female.
I also beleive the sole takes on no form
unless God has need to use an angel.

Comment by Paula on 02/28/03
I especially loved the ending of this story dear



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