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Big Bad Huey
by Mary Kay

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Comment by Early June on 10/21/05
What an incredible imagination you have.  Unfortunately, having suffered at the abuse of bullies till my adult life, that part of your story is painful, almost too painful for me.  It nearly reflects the amount of despair and hoplessness involved in one's persecution.  
You did a good job of entertaining us.  Thank you for posting this work.  I am looking for more clever postings from you.

Comment by SassySue on 10/15/05
Nice story with everyone getting their just deserts in the end.

Thanks for writing and posting this story.

SS



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