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The Big Winner
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/20/09
That's a sweet and lovely story,I loved it.
Silvia.
Comment by Tiffany on 06/02/07
love the story glad for the happy ending!
Comment by Early June on 07/14/04
Once again Jennifer makes an outstanding tale. Another imaginative twist on the transgender theme. Good writing like most of your postings
Comment by theclaw on 05/07/04
One of your best!

one small thing that should have happened. while in labor anita should have cried out a few times that she was really a man and should not be there.
Comment by Jane Hudson on 05/07/04
Great story Men may make more money but women make and bring new life in to this world how wonderful is that, painful but yet wonderful. I just loved this story
Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 05/07/04
I loved the story too! Body swaps can be rather boring and a bit too magical for me, but this one is different. The details on pregnancy and a very fair ending - just shows that it is more important who you really are deep inside rather what the outside is! Wish really it was me!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)
Comment by Eric on 05/07/04
well written story, I loved the happy ending & the way 'she' slwoly' turns into Anita. The only problem for me is tht the story is very passive, but perhaps that was intentional.
Comment by willow on 05/07/04
This really is a neat gift.  Several of your stories have been posted lately and I really enjoy them.

I was really interested in the details and you have a very fluid style.

Combining some of your work with the theme of a style like PRIMACY would be something that I would love to see.  If you are ever interested at all.

Love
Pussywillow


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