story started out fun but as soon as tara revealed herself as a cheating whore I stopped even when he hit her across the face!! I would have stabbed him disabled the other bikes took his gone home took all cash assets get another after cutting all restraints & locks off, then disappeared!!! if she hated him that bad she should have divorced him & set him free so she can be the whore she wants to be!!!

Hi Karen. "Biker's Broad" is an amazing story that's still messing with my head now, 24 hrs later. I dig bikers, and Jewel is a character I can really relate to. Her adventures in Part 1 are just my idea of heaven! The early scene where Ron & Big Mike discover her collecting the mail in her maid's uniform & 'working chains' is delightful.
And then, Part 2 is served up like a dessert of sour pickles after a main course of chocolate cake (btw, is 'chocolate' the opposite of 'vanilla'? :-}), totally different and utterly shocking. Ron's mood change is nothing less than psychotic, and the beating he gives poor Jewel is terrifying. This might serve as a warning to all of us BDSM types on the dangers of Going Too Far.
Of course the happy ending is nice, but I wonder if Jewel will ever recover psychologically from a fantasy that turned to such real-life horror?
I wonder if I will?

and this piece seems to have considerable forced homosexuality in it.

Karen Anne .... This is a fantastic story. You gave enought detail to make very exciting. I am not into the violence part, but you made it a true part of the story line and not just added for excitement.

I tend to like stories that are edgy, but still possible. This one fits that catagory very well. The only real stretch was the quick physical transformation at the beginning.


Keep up the great work ....

Hi luv

Liked this new adventure by you.
Talked again with D.B. about "Excuse" and she said she just read it and "filed it" - she liked it but is not into heavy scenes.  If anyting is used, she will use "Challenge" which I have agreed to.
With the virus thing, no comms. available on the net from school or the libraries in my area - hope to have my pc back soon and be back online.
Miss chatting with you and others.
be well
hiliary

The writing is good and the story is well crafted, but I just don't get it.  I guess it's Ok, if it's consensual, and this is, after all, the United States where pursuit of happiness is protected.  But I will never, never understand How  anyone could LIKE/desire BDSM let alone being a slave.  I go with Lincoln, "Just as I would not be a slave, so I would not be a master."  I really thought the happy ending was when it was written that Jewell was treated as an equal in the family.
PS - Why weren't Tara and her brother charged as accessories somewhere along the line?