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The Bike Shop
by Suzy Love

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Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
559EVF Really appreciate you sharing this article. Really Great.

Comment by Anna on 01/03/09
Oooh Suzy! What a beautiful story. It reminds me of my own similar experience. I am now 27 and an experienced and beautiful CD. When I was only 15, a visitor staying with our family found me one afternoon dressed in a sexy mini, a tight top over teenage breasts and high heels. At first he thought I was a girl, then realised who I was. He told me I was beautiful and it was clear to me that he was very excited. I had been secretly lusting after this handsome masculine hunk since he arrived to stay with us. I went over to him and on tip toes I kissed him. He kissed me back and we became very passionate. He lifted me up in his arms and carried me to his room. I felt so wonderfully girlish, so completely submissive, being carried in his arms and gently placed on the bed. He caressed and stroked my body all the while telling me how beautiful I was, and how lovely my body was and my hair and my face. He kissed me gently at first but he soon became urgent. I knew I could pleasure him, my very first man, and took his beautiful hard penis into my mouth and gently sucked him until he erupted into my mouth. I will never forget the feeling of femininity which washed over me with the knowledge that he had cum for me. He took me gently as I lay on my back looking up at his strong manly face, my silky legs encircling his back. To this day, this is my preferred position - submissive on my back under my man.
We had a passionate affair until his stay with us ended and he left. I never saw him again but I owe him so much. Because of him I had the confidence to tell my parents that I wanted to live as a girl, and because of him I never ever doubted that I was beautiful and desirable, something which was confirmed by my many boyfriends over the years, and which is confirmed to me daily (and more especially nightly) by my wonderful boyfriend.
Thank you Suzy for bringing back all these teenage memories for me.

 

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Comment by Julie on 09/14/02
Hello! Does anybody here know how to say "kidporn"? I was revolted by the story- it was a pedophile's (literally) wet dream. I really thought crystal's standards would have prevented this trash from seeing the light of day, but i was obviously mistaken. In the real world, if the bike shop owner had done anything like this, he would find himself in a place where he had lots of males to fondle, but they would be somewhat older than 13. Please, no more of this junk!

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 09/13/02
I enjoyed Stephie's descriptions of her intense discovery of gay sex.  She would have been so much sexier if her clothing had been more appropriate to her age.  Still, a very enjoyable if unrealistic tale.

Comment by Sharonn on 09/13/02
I would have enjoyed it if it had not included a 13 year old.  It smacks of pedophelia because of the pre-planning.  Try to keep your future characters within the age of consent.  Many of us have had similar fantasies but most of them in an adult setting.

Comment by Pervette on 09/13/02
This is a dream for a lot of people. I question the ethics of using
the promise of a bike to seduce a 13-year-old boy, (& he must have
been mighty sure of his prey to spend all that money on drag before
hand)...but it makes a great story, & some of us here wouldn't have
minded a bit if it had happened to us.
.
Pervy

Comment by suzielynn on 09/13/02
even though i am happily married str8 male & i am a crossdresser it has helped our marriage alot. but when my wife is at work & i dress up as a woman real sexy i always wondered what it would be like to be able to be someones girlfriend & be able to suck a cock & drink his cum & then have him make love to my tight pussy of an ass. i read all these stories of what it is like & have always wondered, because these stories always get me hot & horny. i always wear black silk panties & red toenail polish all the time now. i just love dressing up as a woman.

Comment by suzielynn on 09/13/02
Great Story. i wish i had a man that would buy me sexy clothes & have me put on red lipstick & make love to me.i want to read more like this it got me all horny.i dress up as a woman & always have dreamed of having a boyfriend & have him make love to me



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