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Bikini Beach: Child Star
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Valentina Michelle Smith on 06/09/03
A wonderful story, well written and marvelously executed.  Many of us wish for a life do-over.  Ted/Teri has realized this wish and is happier for it.
I was especially gratified to see an exerpt from one of my favorite plays.  I love the character of Puck, that mischievous but delightful spirit who wreaks so much havok upon the poor mortal world.  And I have seen a performance in which a woman was cast as Robin Goodfellow.  Shakespeare often used gender transformation in his plays.  Viola from Twelfth Night comes to mind, as does Portia in The Merchant of Venice and the hapless Page in from the beginning of Taming of the Shrew.  I am glad that you have incorporated the Bard's work in yours.  Bravo!

Comment by Paula on 06/05/03
they all live happily ever after. A good story dear



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