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Bikini Beach House Carwash: The Revenge
by Fret Pearson

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Comment by Alice Kramden on 02/15/04
Jezzi, amusingly enough, this story pre-dated the "Bikini Beach" universe, so it's definitely not his fault. :-)

Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/08/02
I loved old B-movies and enjoyed your little story as much.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/08/02
Pretty good story, but maybe a disclaimer on the title - I was expecting a story set in Elrod's Bikini Beach universe.



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