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Bikini Beach: Invasion From Space
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by deedee clark on 03/08/04
One of your caracters is called 124C41+. The rest of the name is Ralph. A very early SCFI, and a great story. Did you piuck out the numbers at random, or did you read the book??

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 09/14/03
uhmmmmmm okay.

Comment by jimmyinwhite on 09/09/03
i love that the heros of my favorite stories working together to keep their world safe from some evil that wouuld harm it. i wonder what was the wizards side of this story. i finally got the last line. all i can say is please let us know what happened to the other scouts around the world.



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