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Bikini Beach: Teaching Sally
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Sharon on 10/21/04
Sorry so late
Seems a pity that Mitch had to learn at the cost of his manhood and that his wife is so agreeable.
Seems to me that a better ending is possible.
Thats all I have to say.

Comment by anonymousOne on 06/06/03
Ellie,

I read this story several years ago on another web site. It remains one of my all time favorites. Reading it again was like running into an old friend. Thank you again for sharing it.

Comment by Rose2 on 06/05/03
   I have always thought of Bikini Beach as a place of healing, more than a place of punishment.  This story shows the restoration of love cutousy of "The Old Woman", Anya and Ellie the Bikini Beach staffer that we hardly see.

Comment by Paula on 06/04/03
different type of story where the transform happy so close to the begining rather than middle or ending. Wonderfully different tale



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