very good story  i cryed thought out it and more at the end

Nice memories.

A wonderful story of a very lucky boy.  I would bet you are still dressing as I am I also started young and am now retired. I would love to know.  Carol

A wonderful sexy tale.  Even in its new (and presumably improved) version it could have used better editing and proofreading, but the story itself was sexually charged and exciting.  Billy was lucky to have had Janet as neighbor during his formative years.  I'm so jealous.

SS

A wonderful sexy tale.  Even in its new (and presumably improved version) it could have used better editing and proofreading, but the story itself was sexually charged and exciting.  Billy was lucky to have had Janet as neighbor during his formative years.  I'm so jealous.

SS

So where is the story? All I see is the intro papagraph......Lynette

Hi Bilie,
Such a great story and since it truly happened  the detail you provided was excellent.  It brings back many fond memories of how I started.  I truly hope you continue to write.  You have great possibilities and I am certain you have many other rich memories of your past episodes of crossdressing.
Krissi

Okay, I agree with the others about formatting (& quotation marks). BUT...what a wonderful story! I think the husband's joining in with such alacrity is a bit hard to believe, but on the other hand, people DO behave like that, sometimes, so that's okay.
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A real heart-warmer, & something many of us would have liked to experience. Janet's death provided a natural, & believable, closure to the story.  Thanks for sharing this with us.
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--Pervy

It's obvious you put a lot of effort into typing this story out, but is it too difficult to spend a few minutes formatting it so people can read it?

Dear Wild One:

Just finished my second read of this because I enjoyed it so much I had to read it twice.  I found it quite true to its own characters, warm, loving, and credible.  I thank you for sharing a truly wild series of adventures.  In your place, I don't know how I'd have gone to Janet's funeral without wanting to throw myself in with her.  Reading of her demise made me cry -- both times -- In fact, if you do re-work this a bit, and it is worthy of reworking (spellings to correct, paragraphs, etc.) so more people can enjoy it, consider exploring more of Billy/Susie's feelings about Janet's cancer and subsequent death.  Expanding the development of that portion in time might make a poignant, albeit very different, kind of story in itself.

Anyway, excellent first contribution, and I am very hopeful to read more of your work in the future.  

Love & Huggs,
Sheryl S.

Too gay for my taste, sorry.

An amazing tale and one i can well believe! Well written and a good story flow - don't worry about the paragraph comments - they probably also move their lips as they read!

Angy

I began reading the story and believe it is something I would enjoy reading in its entirety, but . . .    Everything is run together, and this makes for very difficult reading.  Additionally, if it isn't read all in one sitting and within one moment of time, it is impossible to find where one left off.  It needs paragraphs/editing.  Doesn't need to be re-written, just broken up by the thought each segment is trying to convey.

Howdy
I wanted to read your story but I had a very difficult time because of lack of paragraphs. God invented the paragraph for a reason. Maybe you can find someone to help you with paragraphing the story. I hope you try again.