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Biloxi Blues
by Allyssa Davis

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Comment by Aleesha on 03/17/10
I too can understand your dilema. My experiences have been mainly while driving, much safer.

Comment by john on 05/16/08
oh how I can understand your predicament!!

Comment by jeannette on 12/02/07
Good Story!!! I live near the New Orleans Area, and have "femmed" myself up a few times, put a femme one piece bathing suit on and laid out on the beach in Biloxi, Gulfport, Long Beach, & Waveland on a number of times! (Did NOT get CAUGHT, though!!). Would have loved to be "read" my a HORNY Policeman, to see what he 'does' to me!!... Keep the story going!!

Comment by Connie Diane Cunningham on 12/09/06
Your stories really hit home with me because I was stationed at Biloxi in the late '70s and purchased my first pair of 3" heels at that very same store in Reno in the mid-nineties. Actually they were a birthday present from my very supportive and understanding 2nd wife. Your narrative is so right on!  We travelled frequently years ago, and my wife had no problem with me venturing out at night from the motel. She actually talked me into it, 'cause I was scared to death!  Not far, of course, just to the car to retrieve a forgotten item, or to the ice machine to refill the bucket. It was one night late in Marysville Calif that I came around the corner with the bucket overflowing when I ran into (literally) 2 couples obviously overindulging in the bubbly or whatever and they clocked me immediately. We stood there for what seemed like hours with our mouths collectively hanging open, staring at each other, but thankfully, they said "sorry!" and walked on around the building before starting to  howl with laughter. Needless to say, that was the last time I went out dressed, and even now, 11 years later, the last 7 of which I've been on feminizing hormones, I can't imagine doing it again. I can't begin to think what I would have said or done if those folks had been 2 cops instead. I so admire your courage Allyssa! I hope you can continue your experience and blossom to your full potential. Thank You, Connie D.

Comment by Audry on 11/12/06
Real good story much more realistic then most, One who has been there can note the authenticity I know as I have been there, I live in a small community. but never got as far as you did, And the exitement you speak of is right on the money. I have purged amost my fem clothes that are hard to hide do to a siblings moving in with me but reading these seems to be a relief valve for the time being,
Keep up the good work,,,, I am inspired to try again

Comment by Kay on 03/19/04
A very well written story that rings true..at least to me.  No magic, no gimmicks, just a story that pretty much tells it like it is.
Please write more quality stories.

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 03/18/04
A very well written first effort from a clearly literate writer.  I look forward to more from her.
Cordially,
Mardee



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